Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by anum324, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. anum324

    anum324 New Member

    main tujhe jeena chahti hoon.

    Sard hawayein mast mausam ho naya ehsaas
    tum ho , main hun,aur aalam bhi ho kuch khaas
    Khushiyon ke dor se bandh kar aati hon duaien
    saath saath hum, yeh saara aalam mehkaein.

    tab ...
    is mehkte aalam,suhaane mausam mein
    main tujhe jeena chahti hoon.

    Tere mere kadam poora yeh safar karein
    khushi ya gham,hum hamesha saath chalein.
    Jab hai tera haath mere haathon mein
    to gham nahi mujhe koi zindagi mein.

    har khushi mein, har gham mein
    main tujhe jeena chahti hun.


    This is what i cud express in 15 minutes.Just a thought revolving around my love and all those I love.

    Give me ur honest feedbacks.Wud be obliged.
    Hardik and CrYpTiC_angel like this.
  2. koolstrum

    koolstrum The Chosen One

    Hmm. NIce one. passion about life or luv.?
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    nice poem....but cant rep u:mad:
  4. syedtabraiz

    syedtabraiz New Member

    Nice one..Could have been better..After all writing something in the middle of something is not an easy job..

    So great effort..Waiting to get more good ones from you..
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    i like it :)

    reps 4 u!
  6. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    Very good!!...reps 4 u...:):)

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