Zindagi ke rang

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Mar 1, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    This poem is thanks to my Philosophy class... was too boring :)
    The theme had been on my mind for a while now. So finally i got the occasion or place to pen it down. Hope you like it.

    Rangon ki keemat na zindagi mein humne hai jaani
    Par unki zaroorat har mod pe sabne hai maani

    Adhura bin uske har suhagan ka shringaar
    Lal kabhi lahoo to kabhi hai angaar

    Kissan se pucho kya hai haryaali
    Ek hara rang laye kitni khushiyaali

    Aasmaan ke anchal mein lipti yeh dharti
    Neele hai sagar, par pyaas na hai bujhti

    Saaya saath chod de aisi hai andhere ki kahaani
    Kaali raaton se humne ujaalon ki kadr hai jaani

    Moti si shabnam ki bondein pallav pe paana
    Shwet mein shanti aur anth mein sama jaana

    Ambar ke neeche kitne hai rangeen jahan
    Phir bhi talaashte hai ki woh naye rang hai kahan

    ~~~***~~~

    Comments plz :)
     
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    gazal phool, dard shool, sab tumhi se hain
    ansoo bahar, savan shringar, sab tumhi se hain
    raag rang, kushboo basant, sab tumhi se hain
    tum na ho, to kyoon na lage, hum nahi se hain
     
  3. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @varshu didi, niiice, was beyond my comprehension a bit, but oh well, wonder if i can get a Hindi Dictionary :grin:
     
  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ madhuresh.... beautiful lines. .. no comments ??

    @ sarat.... he he he... my revenge :)... Nah.. ask me wat you didnt get?
     
  5. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^We'll do it in yahoo pm's :grin:
     
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    areee saheba mera galti huaaa.....bahutt accha, mast, kantaap, jhakaas poem thi :)
     
  7. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    hmm..yaar bunk the philosophy classessss..hehe......man it was bit heavy those hindi.....
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    that ws really well....& yeah, i dint need a dictionery i understood it in one go...so in one word its...beautiful:)
    A nice change frm u.....&I HATE THIS PROCEDURE TO REP :mad:
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ madhuresh... Thank you

    @ abhi... tumhe hindi classes ki zaroorat hai :p:

    @garima.. Thank u sweetie !!
     
  10. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Its beautiful..
    Simple plain truth...laid out over words...

    "Rang hi rang hai charo aur...
    Kisi ki haasi mein to kisi ke rone mein...

    Har din nirala hai...
    Chalo aaj thode aur rang mein dhal jaay, is zindagi ke..."

    Keep writing!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^ wah wah
    I dunno why you have stopped posting your stuff at igt. Its our loss.
    I m glad you liked it. Thank you so much :)
     
  12. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Lovelly poem...Keep it up gal!
     
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks for reading
     
  14. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    Adhura bin uske har suhagan ka shringaar
    Lal kabhi lahoo to kabhi hai angaar

    maine shringaar ko shrinagar pada... :think:

    Lovely one knight_ki_gf.. reps .. but still i dunno how to give them..explain..


    gazal phool, dard shool, sab tumhi se hain
    ansoo bahar, savan shringar, sab tumhi se hain
    raag rang, kushboo basant, sab tumhi se hain
    tum na ho, to kyoon na lage, hum nahi se hain

    Nice one madhuresh ... last line is touching ..

    Hey BTW yeh knight kaun hain...


    :beer:
     
  15. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you sachoo...
    for reps...
    Against the post of the person you want to rep... below the id on the left hand side... you will find a star... if you will click on it. You will be taken to a page where u can approve of the post and give in your comments. If you approve.. u rep a person.. :)
     

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