Another one...not so great.. just a simple gist of life. Hope you like it. Duniya mein aate hi kitne rishte ban gaye Kai lahoo ke to kai pyar ke ban gaye Laad aur pyaar mein jeeti chali gayi zamaane ki tarkash se bekhabar reh gayi Zindagi ke har mod pe main bejhijhak chal padi Logon ke doglepan se anjaan reh gayi Doosro pe hum andha vishwaas karte rahe aur woh bina darre usse todte chale gaye Ankh kholi jab mene to mere sapne toot gaye dil behlaati thi jinse woh sab bahaane chale gaye Zindagi se khushiya chali gayi, gham bhi gaye ek ek kar ke saare yaar chale gaye Aaj naye manzar hai, nayi rahein bhi hai Aur phir zindagi jeene ki nai chahe bhi hai Main phir himmat juta muskurati chal padi Zindagi se gila na kar, usse pyar karti gayi ~~~***~~~
Yah i know pamposh.. by the way i was editing while u posted. So maybe u should come n check out the last para that i included later. Thank you so much for taking time out to read !!
well sounds little better now....i wanna know varshita do u write peoms wen u r in mood.....or u write poems to get urself into some kind of mood.
You got me there !! It works both ways for me... i write when i m in a mood.. or want to be in one I m glad i included those last few lines. Thanks
@varshu didi, echoes walk_alone's thoughts.....that being said....lol i think you will have a chance of saying the very same thing for me soon
nah.. i know it myself... I forced myself to write it down... too many things on my mind... wanna write something else .. which i ve forbidden for myself (read as sad poems) Anyways.. thanks for reading
remove tht one frm the mind and see ur life main aur bahrein aayengi...don be in the nutshell with him guardin the door ..........hmm...
Thanks for reading abhi and your concern for me. But i want to make a genuine request to all. Plz dont judge these poems as the happenings of my life. Its something that i write. They do not necessarily have to be from my life. So focus on the poem and not my life
well....cant say anythng...cause we r trying to do the same thng....thats to write somethng different frm our usual stuff...I mean Sad poems...All the Best :grin: I liked the optimist ending here....
Thanks garima... But yeah .. one thing i realised after writing this poem... That i just cant force myself to write happy poems. If the drift is for a gloomy one.. then let it be. I cant drive my emotions to the planes i want to take them to... they will flow for themselves It was only after this blunder that i wrote "I live on"... which i really wanted to write in the first place but wrote this instead. But as we all say... all bad things do bring in something good So i m glad i wrote this... as i ll remember this lesson forever !!
i am free so i look at the grass, i look at the tree otherwise, i would have made my mind to only see things, which i should find no use lottrying around, no use tossing lost make money u man machine, know everones cost calcuate ur imagination, use someones logic measure ur smile, weigh how much tragic these word's dont change the world but need words to be heard before we all become history so i look at the grass, i look at the tree i'm free i start with an exclamation i paused with a comma i swing around with dictions intonations carry the drama take all steps before it die gotta keep moving high and high no no, dont go its lonley at the top here at this all i put a fullstop keep muddling with, some crap around that's a good change and will bring u down let ur pen have a peg of whisky so i look at the grass, i look at the tree i am free, i am free im free
now it does i suppose...................... will not explain what it means if have not heard that song...so many roads by greatful dead .....just put this...."so many roads" windows media player ..this will gie u the song...this all will definatly make sense
