Zindagi ka safar

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Feb 26, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Another one...not so great.. just a simple gist of life.
    Hope you like it.

    Duniya mein aate hi kitne rishte ban gaye
    Kai lahoo ke to kai pyar ke ban gaye

    Laad aur pyaar mein jeeti chali gayi
    zamaane ki tarkash se bekhabar reh gayi

    Zindagi ke har mod pe main bejhijhak chal padi
    Logon ke doglepan se anjaan reh gayi

    Doosro pe hum andha vishwaas karte rahe
    aur woh bina darre usse todte chale gaye

    Ankh kholi jab mene to mere sapne toot gaye
    dil behlaati thi jinse woh sab bahaane chale gaye

    Zindagi se khushiya chali gayi, gham bhi gaye
    ek ek kar ke saare yaar chale gaye

    Aaj naye manzar hai, nayi rahein bhi hai
    Aur phir zindagi jeene ki nai chahe bhi hai

    Main phir himmat juta muskurati chal padi
    Zindagi se gila na kar, usse pyar karti gayi


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  2. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    well not best of ur poems but worth reading.
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Yah i know pamposh.. by the way i was editing while u posted. So maybe u should come n check out the last para that i included later.
    Thank you so much for taking time out to read !! :)
  4. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    aacha likha hai "par pak chuka huin ek hi tahar ki kavita pad pad ke, mujhe change chahiye":p:
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    well sounds little better now....i wanna know varshita do u write peoms wen u r in mood.....or u write poems to get urself into some kind of mood.

  6. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You got me there !!
    It works both ways for me... i write when i m in a mood.. or want to be in one :)
    I m glad i included those last few lines. Thanks :)
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    @varshu didi, echoes walk_alone's thoughts.....that being said....lol i think you will have a chance of saying the very same thing for me soon
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    nah.. i know it myself... I forced myself to write it down... too many things on my mind... wanna write something else .. which i ve forbidden for myself (read as sad poems)
    Anyways.. thanks for reading :)
  9. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    remove tht one frm the mind and see ur life main aur bahrein aayengi...don be in the nutshell with him guardin the door ..........hmm...
  10. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks for reading abhi and your concern for me.
    But i want to make a genuine request to all. Plz dont judge these poems as the happenings of my life. Its something that i write. They do not necessarily have to be from my life. So focus on the poem and not my life
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) well....cant say anythng...cause we r trying to do the same thng....thats to write somethng different frm our usual stuff...I mean Sad poems...All the Best :grin:
    I liked the optimist ending here....
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks garima... But yeah .. one thing i realised after writing this poem... That i just cant force myself to write happy poems. If the drift is for a gloomy one.. then let it be. I cant drive my emotions to the planes i want to take them to... they will flow for themselves :)
    It was only after this blunder that i wrote "I live on"... which i really wanted to write in the first place but wrote this instead.
    But as we all say... all bad things do bring in something good :)
    So i m glad i wrote this... as i ll remember this lesson forever !!
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i am free
    so i look at the grass, i look at the tree
    otherwise, i would have made my mind
    to only see things, which i should find
    no use lottrying around, no use tossing lost
    make money u man machine, know everones cost
    calcuate ur imagination, use someones logic
    measure ur smile, weigh how much tragic
    these word's dont change the world
    but need words to be heard
    before we all become history
    so i look at the grass, i look at the tree
    i'm free
    i start with an exclamation
    i paused with a comma
    i swing around with dictions
    intonations carry the drama
    take all steps before it die
    gotta keep moving high and high
    no no, dont go its lonley at the top
    here at this all i put a fullstop
    keep muddling with, some crap around
    that's a good change and will bring u down
    let ur pen have a peg of whisky
    so i look at the grass, i look at the tree
    i am free, i am free
    im free
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^ ahem ahem... did ya post in the wrong thread :think:
  15. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    now it does i suppose......................
    will not explain what it means
    if have not heard that song...so many roads by greatful dead .....just put this...."so many roads" windows media player ..this will gie u the song...this all will definatly make sense
  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    ^^ whats going on?? I m a bit confused !!

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