Tera saaya meri ruh pe kuch is tarah chaa gaya Meri parchayi aur tujh mein fark kam hota gaya Har kadam utha dharti pe, leke tujh se predna Di tune vo shakti ki aasmaan bhi neeche jhuk gaya Tu hai mere pass, bas isi ghuroor mein Parvton se kya, tufaano se bhi lad gaya Krodh to kiya kaabu tune apne pyaar se Lahra gaya samaa aur sheetal mein ho gaya Gum ke kheton ko seecha tune khushi ke baandh se Parsaaniya miti sari aur zindadil mein ho gaya please please please comment...it was very tough for me to come in mood for this poem...:
sahi hai..ek kamaal ki baat ye ki maine bhi ek taza gazal soochi aur uska pehla sher bhi parchayeen ki baat kar ta hai...stange na...all in all good attempt in hindi :thumbs up:
Hey nice 1...im gonna hve 2 print this out & add 2 my poetry collection!Do you mind? btw...am really touched by it ek din humara dil bhi aise hi zinda hua tha laikin aaj jal ke raakh hogaya hai!
