Zakhmi Dil

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by DesiPride143, Mar 10, 2005.

  1. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    hey peeps, yes, me is back w/ ma urdu here it is...

    humne kuch aisa lagaa
    ki hume "humraahi" mil gayaa
    unhone "hum" ko humse alag kiya
    aur "raahi" koi aur chun liya

    pyar humne kuch aisa kiya
    ki dil apna khud hi tod liya
    unhone to sirf eitna kahaan
    "hume koi aur mil gayaa"

    phool they humne chaahe bichaaye
    unki haseen rahoon mein
    baad mein voh hi phool hume chubhe
    ban kar kaante, nigaahon mein

    Humaari aur tumari jodi
    kaante aur phoolon ki tarah hain
    eitne kareeb ho kar bhi
    hum to juda juda hain...

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  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    mm..DP..was tht based on some real life experience..:shock:
    if i may ask...

    n i really like ur poem....
    every time i read it, it reveals somethin new

    are all ur poems on the same topic?
  3. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    no no, i havn't had experience like dat yet...but u never know...anyways...and no not all ma poems are like dat but yea most of em are...btw..wut did u find new?
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    new in the sense, everytime i read the poem it reveals somethin or gives a differnt view to the whole thing

    its HEAVY!!
    the words have many meanings...

    n am glad to know u didnt have any any such experiences in Real...:)
  5. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    yea..well, not yet..but u never know...
  6. atthanii

    atthanii Theif Slayer

    wah gallah hai...

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