Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by browneyegurlie, Oct 9, 2005.

  1. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    Dreams say your the one,
    the one and only to have found.
    Yet the truth speaks against,
    my words profound.
    Should I hold this one last wish,
    or blow it away in the wind?
    A gentle breeze brushes by,
    warm air holding comfort.
    Memories held of the times past,
    but will the future be the same?
    Clearly not as the mathematical equation says.
    It was all an illusion,
    created for no benefit.
    A happy ending, not.
    the_wizard and vini like this.
  2. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    A good poem.
    its sweet..
  3. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Very nice poem but sorta worrying. We need to talk. Been too long.
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender many gloomy poems out here :Worried:

    nice outpour of words however...
    reps for u sweety! :)
  5. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    thanks glad people liked it.....
    @tejas yes dear been a long time.....:(
  6. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    sad but true ...
  7. bobbit_uncut

    bobbit_uncut Banned

    hey that was a rather heavy poem
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    All i did was swallow a lump in the throat!! :shock:
    this poem is really good..
  9. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    thanks this poem has a lot my emotions in...i only wrote what i feel

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