. . ~You, Me and I~ There is a "We" between the World and "Me". i'd lie to you if i said it isnt true boon or bane i'll change sober awhile perky the other muffling the feelings inside speak to me and you'l hear me falter breaths may not tell how long one lives heartbeats maybe the knell each moment gives clinging onto me the night fades in want of a sunshine the new day awakes its said sometimes the words entwine the being sometimes the being dons the words life will go on days will pass you by living the words tattooed on the heart you know i'll never be the one for you someone said like flowers on a bough the smile on me glows belying its worth i still wont complain i'll stand by you, like i always do i dont have any more confessions dont give me more of your pretentions there is a "Me" between the "You" and "I" ---`-,--;--<@ Do gimme your views whenever you read my poem And i'd appreciate honesty whether you like it hate it or feel it could've been better Let me know Thanks for reading
excellent overall .. though u seem to be at loss with the flow here and there, nevertheless great job ...
thanks everyone would try and improve this was one of those poems where i hardly felt like redoing it anywy thanks for reading..
