this is just a simple poem which i wrote in a second. rather.. it just occured to me.. yes.. i love you.. but not as much.. may be i'm crazy for you, but not as such..! your thoughts dont occupy my mind each moment only when you are wit me and only when you are not may be i'm lost in you every moment.. but not as such..! yes.. i love you.. but not as much.. i dont need you to be with me each time only when i breath in and only when i breath out may be i need you every time.. but not as such..! yes.. i love you.. but not as much.. your sweet face don't ellude me each second only when i close my eyes and only when i dream wit open may be its only you i see every second.. but not as such..! yes.. i love you.. but not as much..
thik se decide kar..aur bol sach, How much do u love me t..h....i.......s much or T.........h............i..........s this much ! Aur sun jaldi kar, apan karte nahi wait Varna line mein peechee lag and take another date ! Karne to kabhi deti nahi..haanth ko bhi thouch ye ladkiyaan jhooth bolti hai yaaro, bus karti hai much-much !! EK second main yahi dimag main aaya.....
waise poem to acchi hai... hmmmm... nice one..but really this whole poem came to your mind in just a second... ya kisi aur ki hai... waise if its yours then must say its a nice one..and u should try to write more...
You Think Of Me...! Very nicely written...Madam ! Feelings well expressed...! Hmmm...only when I dream with eyes open...hai na ? Here's something from me... ( ijaazat ke saath ) You Think Of Me...! This evening I write because you are still there it doesn't care if I have some thoughts to tell, some lived moments that I should mould... I write for you…so that if any passer-by… Stranger to you, to your love so kind and pure May understand how important you are… I write of a ray of the sun through the clouds of a kiss of the moon in the darkness of the night of a love who wakes up at the light of a memory I write of you …because you think of me Amanush...
@walk alone... thanks dude!!! @madhuresh... lol...lol..lol... and T.................H.................I.............S...............M...............C....................H....... @Vipin... yes dear..thats mine... and so sweet of u for those comments : @amanush... u r gr8 yaar... have no words for you.. :nw:
but not as much^^....lol...: very romantic poem.....very well written...gr8 goin nimisha...u rule!!:beer:
your imagination flashes the bulb of heart with the power of limitless energy.....the intense feelings and self talk depicts the description clearly awesome.............exceptionally brilliant piece of work from nimishaa....... i love you much much more.......... rohit astroguru26
@lavina.... i love you too..dear.... : : @hardik thank you..but not as much....oops! i mean very much..! @rohit.... i love you too much much much.... i love you..really as such....
nice poem with an apt usage of much and such and i thought im a good poetess must have lost sense of touch had lost my mind for a while but need to get a clutch though ur poem didnt sweep me off feet as such but the truth remains that i loved it pretty much i know u cant get what im talkin..its all double dutch nimisha..ur the 2nd person who gave me complex writing good poetry!! :sadbye: sorry for all that blabbering ^^ but im sure ur acquainted wid poetic spells..hehe
dont say it here dear...... no need to announce it in public :band: ..world is watching us naa......... rohit astroguru26
@vini.... i dont give any complex to you as much..coz im sure i cant write good as such... @rizaaj.... thanks!!!!! @Rohit.... :secret: (^&*## @@#^)
@ vini nimisha is simply trying to show u how modest she is : lol good work as usual n yeah i wonder when i will write so we,,ll
