yes.. i love you..

nimisha

nimisha

.:Forum Leader:.
this is just a simple poem which i wrote in a second.
rather.. it just occured to me..



yes.. i love you.. but not as much..
may be i'm crazy for you, but not as such..!

your thoughts dont occupy my mind each moment
only when you are wit me
and only when you are not
may be i'm lost in you every moment.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..

i dont need you to be with me each time
only when i breath in
and only when i breath out
may be i need you every time.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..

your sweet face don't ellude me each second
only when i close my eyes
and only when i dream wit open
may be its only you i see every second.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..
 
thik se decide kar..aur bol sach,
How much do u love me t..h....i.......s much or
T.........h............i..........s this much !

Aur sun jaldi kar, apan karte nahi wait
Varna line mein peechee lag and take another date !

Karne to kabhi deti nahi..haanth ko bhi thouch
ye ladkiyaan jhooth bolti hai yaaro, bus karti hai much-much !!

EK second main yahi dimag main aaya.....
 
waise poem to acchi hai...

hmmmm...

nice one..but really this whole poem came to your mind in just a second... ya kisi aur ki hai...

waise if its yours then must say its a nice one..and u should try to write more...
 
You Think Of Me...!

Very nicely written...Madam ! Feelings well expressed...!

Hmmm...only when I dream with eyes open...hai na ? :)

Here's something from me... ( ijaazat ke saath )

You Think Of Me...!

This evening I write because you are still there
it doesn't care if I have some thoughts to tell,
some lived moments that I should mould...

I write for you…so that if any passer-by…
Stranger to you, to your love so kind and pure
May understand how important you are…

I write of a ray of the sun through the clouds
of a kiss of the moon in the darkness of the night
of a love who wakes up at the light of a memory

I write of you …because you think of me

Amanush...

:)
 
@walk alone... thanks dude!!! :cool:

@madhuresh... lol...lol..lol... and T.................H.................I.............S...............M...............C....................H....... ;)

@Vipin... yes dear..thats mine... and so sweet of u for those comments :o:

@amanush... u r gr8 yaar... have no words for you.. :nw:
 
but not as much^^....lol...:p:

very romantic poem.....very well written...gr8 goin nimisha...u rule!!:beer:
 
nimisha said:
this is just a simple poem which i wrote in a second.
rather.. it just occured to me..



yes.. i love you.. but not as much..
may be i'm crazy for you, but not as such..!

your thoughts dont occupy my mind each moment
only when you are wit me
and only when you are not
may be i'm lost in you every moment.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..

i dont need you to be with me each time
only when i breath in
and only when i breath out
may be i need you every time.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..

your sweet face don't ellude me each second
only when i close my eyes
and only when i dream wit open
may be its only you i see every second.. but not as such..!
yes.. i love you.. but not as much..
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your imagination flashes the bulb of heart with the power of limitless energy.....the intense feelings and self talk depicts the description clearly awesome.............exceptionally brilliant piece of work from nimishaa.......

i love you much much more.......... ;)


rohit
astroguru26
 
@lavina.... i love you too..dear.... :p: :p:

@hardik thank you..but not as much....oops! i mean very much..!

@rohit.... i love you too much much much.... i love you..really as such.... ;)
 
nice poem with an apt usage of much and such
and i thought im a good poetess must have lost sense of touch
had lost my mind for a while but need to get a clutch
though ur poem didnt sweep me off feet as such
but the truth remains that i loved it pretty much


i know u cant get what im talkin..its all double dutch
nimisha..ur the 2nd person who gave me complex writing good poetry!! :sadbye:
sorry for all that blabbering ^^ but im sure ur acquainted wid poetic spells..hehe ;)
 
nimisha said:
@rohit.... i love you too much much much.... i love you..really as such.... ;)
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:oops: dont say it here dear...... no need to announce it in public :band: ..world is watching us naa.........


rohit
astroguru26
 
@vini.... i dont give any complex to you as much..coz im sure i cant write good as such...

@rizaaj.... thanks!!!!!

@Rohit.... :secret: (^&*## @@#^)
 
nimisha said:
^^^^^^^so u doubt on my modesty huh!!!!! :think: :think:
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lol just joking or else i bet u would have surely posted this poem before
Modesty

i want it known
for the record
that i am modest

i am, in fact,
the most modest person
you will ever meet

no single person
in the history of the universe
alive or dead
past, present or future
can ever claim
to be as modest
as me

i am so good
at being modest
that they should create
an award
just so that i
can win it

that said, i must
(ever so modestly, of course)
bid you good day
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poem
 
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