Yet another poem that I wrote for him... Ye kya hai mai nahi jaanti Janti hu to bas itna...ki mere dil me hai kuchh chhupa bohot sara pyar, thodi si nafrat, or...darr darr...usko khone ka, jise kabhi paya hi nahi darr...us se milne ka, jo mujhse alag tha hi nahi darr...usko jaan ne ka, jisne kabhi mere baare me socha hi nahi kya karu is darr ka?? kaha chhupau isko...ya fir batau kisko chaha tha batana usse, jise chaha tha is dil ne bataya bhi usse, par wo samajh na paya kya chhupa hai is dil me meri saaloan ki chahat ko uda gaya wo mazak me dard to bohot hua, par usse chhalakne na dia is aankh ne aisa kyu hota hai??? jab koi pyar karta hai, to usse dukh kyu milta hai socha na tha ek din aisa bhi ayega jab mera hi saya mujhse alag ho jayega fir to hum bilkul akele ho jayenge is jahan me aye Khuda...is se behtar to tu le le mujhe apni panah me (some people mite not like the 'attitude' of the poem....but anyways,,,this is ME...with hell lotta attitude otherwise...mite not reflect in my poems though)
hey, u know for the 1st time i read a hindi poem... (except back in skool when i was little) wont say anythng abt d 'attitude of the poem' but it's good... i loved it
@angel thanks yaar @ansh...thanks to u tooooo well...it went on to b a lil sad @the end...so i thot some ppl mite not like it...but anyways, as if i ever cared..to wat they say :
for the first time ... i dun need any translation (had some diff with two words... mom was at hand ) .. you know what buddy ... i am lost for words .. i really am ... you always come up with good poetry when you let your emotions flow .. excellent
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yeah...the expression of the poetry readily proves the fact that the emotional pain has power to make anyone grow and mature.... garima..........well done rohit
