: hi....nothing special.......bus jus wrote something without any topic in my mind.......so jus random thoughts n i came up with this....... mera safar manzil ko hai angaarey hain aur andherey hain toofani raat main kaisey bujhey armaan merey jo jaltey rahey kaisey bhulaaon sapney terey puchhain yeh mujhsey sapney merey pairon taley yun aatish uthaa chhupa hua jo dil main merey tanhai main jo ashq merey behtey huey bhi jaltey rahey sehraa main khoya main hoon kahan dhundoo kinara main kyun yahan murjhaa gaya woh phool kaheen khila tha jo kal ummeedon sey ab na koi yahan apna mera main hoon yahan aur laashaa mera : comments?
WOW! :rock: is this ur first POEM on igt? cause haven;t seen ur work... i must say this poem of urs IS AWESOME! i mean i don't really read urdu/hindi poems cause its KINDA hard to figure out the words but this is M-azing! :nw: nice stuff man... short and snappy! the way i like poems! anyway keep riting... luved the lines... angaarey hain aur andherey hain toofani raat main kaisey bujhey armaan merey jo jaltey rahey ps: delete the : in ur post... THIS POEM IS GOOOOOD!
thunkoo hiraa :grin: ....... n its not my first poem on igt......its the 2nd one : .......the other one is 'Ikhlaas'......check the thread it will be on 2nd or 3rd page by now : thanxxxxx for reading.......
^^^ahem ahem...u forgot to count the 'bandar' wali poem : This one is good...& wud look gr88 when composed as a song...reps(if i can..)
dhel bhai angare to shayad jalti huii cheej hote hain to saat saat light bhi produce karte hain so angare and andhera saat nahi ho sakte so "angaarey hain, andherey hain " i hv cut the "aur" tanhai main jo ashq merey behtey huey bhi jaltey rahey..........ashq jalte huee ...pehli baar suna sehraa main khoya main hoon kahan dhundoo kinara main kyun yahan....yaar nadi main hota to kinara dhoondata ...who finds kinara in desert ? murjhaa gaya woh phool kaheen khila tha jo kal ummeedon sey....bas ye this is truly good keep writhg
^ true........but u missed the point i was makin in every line..........angaarey hain..........angaaron ka maqsad jalana hota hai........roshni dena nahi........ ashq beh to rahey hain.........par un paani k qatron main bhi aag hi hai....... n about sehraa n kinara.......thats the question being asked.........when im in a desert why m i lookin for a kinara? where there cant be (or u dont need) a kinara in a desert...... hilarious? :grin:
