Words outside a GraveYard

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by maxeffect, Dec 22, 2007.

  1. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Well, few days ago Hira shared a msg with this title.... i liked d title and came up with this poem...

    Words on a gravestone

    I lived my life
    like a king,
    With a lifestyle which goes
    I had my own freedom
    and my pair of wings.
    I never attended any funeral,
    Coz for me, death wasn't
    a Big thing.

    But the great leveler
    as it is called.
    It came, with its icy hands,
    at my doorstep.
    I tried to save myself
    but it had a tight wrap.
    And it made me sleep here
    with strangers all around.
    Into a deep sleep I am
    but won't call it sound.

    But death be not proud.
    So what, today I am in my shroud.
    I'm still speaking and
    had my share of fun.
    So even if you think I have
    not let you won.
    So, I have no hard feelings
    no flowing emotion.
    Who knows, I might be back
    with the miracle called: reincarnation!

    who else

    Thanx for reading...:)
  2. #iR@


    hmm... must say u have taken death from a completely different point of view man... but somehow death for me is just something completely different from what u have ritten... but then again dats just my point of view... hehe... good job man... liked getting a different view of the same thing... keep riting =)
  3. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Thanx..... probably most ppl wil have a different view of wat is been written
  4. ReBoRn

    ReBoRn New Member

    the last para was a spoiler ..
  5. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    ^... well as i said opinions are bound to differ for this one
    3 differnt ideas are been captured in three paras
  6. maxeffect

    maxeffect New Member

    Wud like to have some more comments....
    wat does ppl think abt looking at death from 2 diff point of view

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