' Where Will I Look For You...? '

Where will I look for you,
my love...?
On roads that are unknown
to me, perhaps...?

In the morning breeze,
maybe,
when the sun upraises
in all its splendour...?

Or in the evening
when disclosed are the clouds
only to grant a glance
at skies new and new earths...?

Or in the night
that mantles itself of stars,
where there is always one
that gleams more than others...?

And really,
I still don't know
if I can ever find you
with these burdens that I bear
in the anxiety of my days...!

But however
Of this I am certain...!
I won't stop looking for you,
because in this search
resides the sense
of my existence...!

 

I was strangely disappointed. Having read your last poem I seem to have been expecting so much more yet I can't see anything wrong with what you've written. It just didn't grab my fancy though.

 

the concept was awesome..
but u havent given full justice to d thought..

nevertheless.. good! but not excellent as per "amanush" standards..

happy to c you posting again though.. happy diwali..
:beer:

 

better than other stanzas......Good hai

 

i think the plot ws gud, it just lacked something new...in terms of comparisions / contrast !
but i really liked the unveness of spells

over-all gud poetry