when words dont rhyme!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by apurbajd, May 21, 2006.

  1. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    Another crappy contribution from me :p: .........

    I thought I would write something today
    something worth reading
    something worth the ink
    writing down all my feelings and all my thoughts
    and all the wild imaginations
    I thought I would make a masterpiece today

    But here I am sitting still
    so many thoughts made me thoughtless
    and so many words inside my heart made me speechless
    where should I start and where should I end
    the confusion never seems to end

    Taking a break I look at the sky
    the moon hiding behind the dark clouds whipsers at me
    dont stop your heart , dont cease your fantasies
    dont be feelingless just because you cant express it

    And I try to sleep
    with a sad feeling
    the pen and the blank paper stares at me
    as if they were laughing at the helplessness of mine
    why oh why, today the words dont seem to rhyme?
  2. #iR@


    AMAZING........ seriously LUVED IT! :) reps........
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    dont think it was crappy..
    was quiet nice... liked it..
  4. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    @#iR nice to knw u loved it , thnx for the reps

    @nimisha thnx for the comment.. :)
  5. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    hmm..good one..mellow and sweet!! :)

    reps for u!
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    so shuld i expect something from ur side in the coming days...?
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thia is exactly what iam going thru...i guess writer's block.

    Amazing composition...and compact.

    hey but in your post words still dnt rhyme.
  8. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    these lines are the best!
    itz awesome man!!!!reps!:beer:
  9. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    @vini ... thanx for the nice comment and reps

    @madhuresh .. hmm ... maybe , thnx 4 reading

    @pamposh .. thanx 4 the comment, hopefully someday it will rhyme :)

    @uj .... thanx man

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