what is your present state of mind

the worlds shortest poem

For tomorrow I will die
The soul of mine will leave this world
And tomorrow I can?t write no more.


add urs

 

ok i am starting a new thread where we all will write in a poetic format our present state of mind in not more than six lines
the poem can be in english or hindi

lets see whoo has the most intense present state of mind.

 

okies... not bad !!

Woh chale hai humko chod kar yeh nazaara to dekho
dil pukarta reh gaya "ek baar palat ke to dekho"

By the way... my signature holds my feelings ... of 2 days back....lol

 

Okay, a haiku which brings out the one question which is bugging me right now:


A thoughtful ponder
The cake was delicious but
Who ate the last piece?

 

Eerie silence decks the night
a moment of tranquility takes flight
in possesion of tomorrow lies today
midnight's melancholy lets me sleep
for dreams of a morrow sweet i have for keep

Nice topic Madhur

 

someone has got drunk two days back smart

aaaj baag me niklaa hai ek gulaaab
pe pe le pe le sakii ek botal julab guess which movie haha

 

@ bjr
whosoever ate the last cake should not have done that

 

many thanks martina lets be serious on the poems
here is1 from myside

last night i had a dream
i was about to die
i woke up to find
why my car is hanging over the bridge

 

raat ko dekha ek sapna
ro rahe the sir pakad ke apna

khula hua tha page IGT ka
pakad ke maar rahi thi GF daan da

 

why will ur gf beat u if ur on IGT

 

bhiyee chod kisne kyaaa kahii
jama le muh main dahii

need hum se keh rahee
abhi sooja raat bahutt huiee

 

well @madhuresh arent u feeling sleepy

 

ae dil....

Har taraf tum hi tum dikhte ho,
meri har khwahish main gum(lost) dikhte ho,

chah kar bhi na paa saka jo main unhe,
ae dil, kya yahi vajah hai jo gumsum dikhte ho.

ae khuda, mera tere liye yahi paigam hai,
kya har pyar karne wale ka yahi anjaam hai?

----for the only one i ever loved-----

 

Another day another dollar
Morning too soon, the sun too bright
Gone is the castle I made in the air
Yet another lonely victim of the night

 

it was a dream and me too wondering why will she beat me on IGT :

 

good job walk alone but comeon look forward in life
woh nahiin to koi aur saahi life doesnt end with one person

but yes to all the bad persons in this world who have hurt others life does repeat for them and that too in cycle

 

Woh humse pyaar ka izhaar kar gaye
Hume apna gunegaar karaar kar gaye
Illzaam humare dil pe ik zakhm ka ho gaya
ik ghav nahi bhara aur doosra nasoor ho gaya

 

Nice lines........
Keep d gud work up..
appreciated.

K.

 

Saturated is wat mah' mind in the now,
Studies, friends n job hunt, to al hv to Vow !
Break, rejuvination n leasure is wat wul do a world of gud,
is thr ny shoulder, ny hand, ny frn on whom now trust i shd ?

Le me knw if sumone like tis..
1st entry here, so am lookin for response ..

brknhrt

 

clocks hands in coordination for d 1st time a day,
Ponderin over possibilities new, here in a lil dozed i lay,
Sumwat into a Scuffle, sumwat into an Exile, here i stand at life's bay,
holdin on to optimism stil tough, against d odds revealin life here i am to stay...

was workin my mind n thought tis is fun so added another..
do le me knw if sumone thinks its worth mentionin..

Brknhrt.