what is your present state of mind

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by write2madhur, Jan 29, 2006.

  1. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    the worlds shortest poem

    For tomorrow I will die
    The soul of mine will leave this world
    And tomorrow I can?t write no more.

    add urs
  2. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    ok i am starting a new thread where we all will write in a poetic format our present state of mind in not more than six lines
    the poem can be in english or hindi

    lets see whoo has the most intense present state of mind.
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    okies... not bad !!

    Woh chale hai humko chod kar yeh nazaara to dekho
    dil pukarta reh gaya "ek baar palat ke to dekho"

    By the way... my signature holds my feelings ... of 2 days back....lol
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Okay, a haiku which brings out the one question which is bugging me right now:

    A thoughtful ponder
    The cake was delicious but
    Who ate the last piece?
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Eerie silence decks the night
    a moment of tranquility takes flight
    in possesion of tomorrow lies today
    midnight's melancholy lets me sleep
    for dreams of a morrow sweet i have for keep

    Nice topic Madhur
  6. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    someone has got drunk two days back smart

    aaaj baag me niklaa hai ek gulaaab
    pe pe le pe le sakii ek botal julab guess which movie haha
  7. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    @ bjr
    whosoever ate the last cake should not have done that
  8. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    many thanks martina lets be serious on the poems
    here is1 from myside

    last night i had a dream
    i was about to die
    i woke up to find
    why my car is hanging over the bridge
  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    raat ko dekha ek sapna
    ro rahe the sir pakad ke apna

    khula hua tha page IGT ka
    pakad ke maar rahi thi GF daan da
  10. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    why will ur gf beat u if ur on IGT
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    bhiyee chod kisne kyaaa kahii
    jama le muh main dahii

    need hum se keh rahee
    abhi sooja raat bahutt huiee
  12. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    well @madhuresh arent u feeling sleepy
  13. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    ae dil....

    Har taraf tum hi tum dikhte ho,
    meri har khwahish main gum(lost) dikhte ho,

    chah kar bhi na paa saka jo main unhe,
    ae dil, kya yahi vajah hai jo gumsum dikhte ho.

    ae khuda, mera tere liye yahi paigam hai,
    kya har pyar karne wale ka yahi anjaam hai?

    ----for the only one i ever loved-----
  14. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Another day another dollar
    Morning too soon, the sun too bright
    Gone is the castle I made in the air
    Yet another lonely victim of the night
  15. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    it was a dream and me too wondering why will she beat me on IGT :p:
  16. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    good job walk alone but comeon look forward in life
    woh nahiin to koi aur saahi life doesnt end with one person

    but yes to all the bad persons in this world who have hurt others life does repeat for them and that too in cycle
  17. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Woh humse pyaar ka izhaar kar gaye
    Hume apna gunegaar karaar kar gaye
    Illzaam humare dil pe ik zakhm ka ho gaya
    ik ghav nahi bhara aur doosra nasoor ho gaya
  18. brokenheart_k5

    brokenheart_k5 New Member

    Nice lines........
    Keep d gud work up..

  19. brokenheart_k5

    brokenheart_k5 New Member

    Saturated is wat mah' mind in the now,
    Studies, friends n job hunt, to al hv to Vow !
    Break, rejuvination n leasure is wat wul do a world of gud,
    is thr ny shoulder, ny hand, ny frn on whom now trust i shd ?

    Le me knw if sumone like tis..
    1st entry here, so am lookin for response ..

  20. brokenheart_k5

    brokenheart_k5 New Member

    clocks hands in coordination for d 1st time a day,
    Ponderin over possibilities new, here in a lil dozed i lay,
    Sumwat into a Scuffle, sumwat into an Exile, here i stand at life's bay,
    holdin on to optimism stil tough, against d odds revealin life here i am to stay...

    was workin my mind n thought tis is fun so added another..
    do le me knw if sumone thinks its worth mentionin..


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