we make our own Gods !

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Apr 18, 2010.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    we make our own Gods
    yes, that is true

    in this mortal world


    once we,

    depend and borrow
    during misery and sorrow

    beg and steal
    never do we kneel

    rob and rape
    in a saintly drape

    kill to thrill
    bow to devil's will

    crave for more
    feel like a whore

    sell ourselves
    in hands of Hades



    then we,

    mold and rot
    repent and regret

    wither in pain
    go insane

    bow our necks
    to force unseen

    scream and cry
    ask for mercy

    dissolve and vanish
    in Godly ashes


    noone stops to clean
    the drivel of greed

    we make our own Gods
    yes, that is true

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    comments are welcome...
     
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    that does look like a linkin park hip hop rock..

    but its meaningful, n thts wht makes a poetry!
    keep posting
    cheers!
    :beer:
     
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Linkinpark is "nu metal" or "rap metal". the band will kill you if they heard you calling them "hip hop" ;-)

    anyway thxs for comment :)
     
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    ^
    lol. LP sucks anyway..
     
  5. good one.. a little dissconnected but i liked it..some how we all have started writing on thigngs very serious...Y sO SeRious ? ann ?...lol
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Its not disconnected, its abstract. Disconnected is the name for verses that donot provide you a clear imagery.

    If you mean by way I have written the paras then thet is just a "technique"

    read again you will realise.








     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    So true!

    Yea, the idea is to keep different ideas seperate. But I still like the 4-8-4-6 line format..hehe
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    technique totally depends on how the message needs to be passed. It often depicts the mind frame of the poet.
     
  9. i have a weak vocabo..and lanvajo...X- 74 in english XII - again 74 ...Boss: ...Listen young ...the company wont pay for yoru english tutions...

    SO what i ment by diconnected was same as u correctly pronounced abstract..\m/
     
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    calm down .. you have put your point across.

    Hope your vocab grows to understand the poetic depths better. cheers !!!
     
  11. tesu

    tesu New Member

    awesome man you rock
     
  12. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Thankyou Tesu.
     
  13. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    naaish....LP kinda...serious...disconnected n abstract poetry!!
    lolz
     
  14. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    thxs Sukriti .. I dunno why all think its LP stuff ... maybe 'coz its too "against the elements" kinds
     
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    well i must accept i imagined LP screamin their balls out
    wid their weird scratching noises..

    nothing wrong wid th poetry though..
     

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