in this whole damn galaxy i wander like some one who's crazy people call me a freak even when out of irritation i shriek when silent..they call me meek a little love..a little care is all that i seek now that everything is at its peak i am still riding strong..i ain't weak so stop calling me a freak while u solve my mystery.. i'll be creating history.. i don't need to make a portfolio of my actions, its the job of nerds.. just grip your seat belts tight around you..when i let my actions speak louder than em words...
ok..!! Now tht i kn ur seventeen .. so will change my tone... everytime u are in process of wirting (have wirtten some lines) think for a second ..what u really want to say manu.... i knw i knw sometimes u really dont knw what to say and poetry is just the reflect of the unsaid ... still just like every intelligent creation its beautiful if the purpose is clear in your mind I feel the poem was confused cause the poetess was confused .... hope u will give some more time for the choice of words and expressions next time ( its a request )
lol yes i indeed was confused.. and ill surely try to be more focussed and exact in my next one.. thank you ..
