Something different from the usual stuff that I write..... Ashko ke beh jane se, Gharondoan ke toot jane se, Waqt to nahi rukta... Kisi ke bichhad jane se, Hawa ke tham jane se, Waqt to nahi rukta... Pyar ke nafrat me badal jane se, Apna astitva kho jane se, Waqt to nahi rukta... Yaadoan ke dhundle ho jane se, Kisi ke mar jane se, Waqt to nahi rukta... Waqt... Khushi hai, to dukh bhi deta hai... Waqt... Dheere dheere saare gham bhula deta hai... Waqt... Zakhm bhi hai, dava bhi... Waqt... Jis se hai thode se ham khafa bhi... Waqt... Kabhi dushman hai to kabhi hamdard... Waqt... Jo kabhi lagta hai Khudgarz... Waiting for u guys to read & judge this attempt....as u'v always done...thanx in advance
Waqt.... ke saath Garima ki poems aur bhi beautiful hoti jaati hai.... really awesome....frist "Waqt to nahi rukta.."...and then "Waqt....." B-e-a-utiful...your poems have feeling Garima...hats-off!!:nw:
OMG..... this is SUCH A WELL RITTEN POEM! i really like it... i think one of ur best works! reps for u gurl!
na waqt hai ye aansuon me dhul ke behane ka na waqt hai ye jakhmon me khulke rehne ka kuch dard yaad aaya ye poem padhke humko.. par ye waqt hai iss poem ko BEAUTIFUL kehne ka....
@Hardik :nw: Thanx man.... @Hira....THANK U SOOOO MUCH.....u cudnt rep me :annoyed: koi baat nai : : @Vikram....Poems are the onli way thru which i express myself/tk frustration out/relax my self....so u can say that : @Nimisha.....watevr u rite is beautiful too....thanx sweety
awesomeee!!!!! but i do need my translator miss garry here ... in the next pm buddy! but it does looks nice to me .. cant say anything till i have understood all of it .. till then ..
@Shak...i hope u wud b able to judge better now @Vikram....no hard feelings taken buddy...relax n smile
hmmm... if that's ur own composition.. i find this as ur best.. !! otherwise... "yawn" from my side ..
^^^excuse me.....wat do i get if i post some copied stuff here...& i mention rite at the beginning of the poem if its not mine.... &yeah,,,instead of 'yawning'....y dont u check google...to find the answer urself....instead of expecting me to say...."ITS MY OWN". :annoyed: :NoTalk:
garima.. i was just teasing yaar.. reps coming ur way.. although tune aabhi tak ek bhi rep nahi diya hain !!!.. X-(. u know me very well come one.. i did'nt expected this from u..
ok garima.. be moody i'm going offline now.. !! i don't care now.. !!.. i was kidding.. and u making mountain of a mole hill bye.. !!
awww so you two made up already!! .. damn i was expecting fireworks .. booooo for me .. anyway .. love it love it love garry ..... really wonderfulll ...
@sharad....i like mountains : @Shak...thanx @J.J.....sure u can...&lemme kno when u complete it :grin:
Time that waits...! Wow...Fantastic... Garima ! Hamara bhi tah e dil se daad kaboul kijiyega...! May I add something...? Time that is waiting for you and nobody else…! Sweet time, impatient time. Time that waits for your smile, your voice... time to listen to you. time to understand you and then to desire you. Time to hold you here with me, time to love you. Time to place my head on your bosom, time to wake you up Time to let you go and to find you again, Time… too little time to listen to my sighs, Time… too much time to let me arrive to your heart. Time that flies and that makes me wait for you... Time… nothing else, but time.. Just to wait for you. Amanush...
