Waiting for You

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Sharmontime, Jun 20, 2006.

  1. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Waiting for You

    i started waiting for you
    from the day i was born
    In this unpredictable waiting,
    there are many people,places, and things
    i have to wait for...

    Yes, till now i have waited
    for many people,places and things.
    Some came, some didn't.
    Some, i reached, some i couldn't.
    Some i got, some, maybe, i wouldn't.

    It's all in these years
    i wished, i could meet you
    i wished, i could reach you
    i wished, i could get you
    And because, it's you who is
    the reason, what i am
    the reason, where i am
    the reason, why i am

    The reason, waiting for you is,
    i am sorry, for the people who didnt come
    i am sad, for places i didnt reach
    i am frustrated, for the things i didnt get
    and that, you are the only solution.

    Written a poem after a long time.
    Hope this is liked.
    However, comments and suggestions welcome.

    -Sharmontime:cool: [TM]
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    wow.. that touched my heart..
    last four lines r so damnn good..
    good work sharmontime!
  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^its good... keep writing ..
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    as Madhuresh says....last ball pe six mara :p:
    poem was gud...& the last four lines as Nimisha said were awesome...
    reps for sure...:beer:
  5. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    Thanks nimisha, apurbajd and garima!!!
    Glad that you all liked it.:)
    Thanks a lot....

    Waiting for more ppl to comment here...:)
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its good
    i liked the third para the most

    do you write hindi aswell?
    if yes..how often ?
  7. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member

    Enjoyed this poem very much. Hell'n
  8. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    app kataar main hain kripiya intazaar karain...
    u r in que please wait...
    nice poem man....reps added
  9. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member


    Thanks a lot for such a response...:eek::
    I am really happy for the reps i got....:dance:

    Yes, Martina, I write in Hindi also , though rarely...

    Yet to write another poem...:eek::

    Thanks once again...

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