hello everyone... heres another poem i rote today... just something about i think is present in our world... hope u guys like it and hope u guys agree with me... looking forward to ur comments! here goes... VOICES MUTED! I live in a world Where voices echo Yet r still unheard I live in a world Where screams Are muffled Cries Are murmured Shouts Are futile Outrage Is a sin And living Is a mistake! An unforgivable mistake… thanks a lot for reading! don't forget to comment!
its good very good... And living Is a mistake! An unforgivable mistake… would like to read above as... And being alive Is a mistake! An unforgivable mistake… The same difference "zinda rahna" and "jeena".
@ ujsen... ummmmm : thanks for reading though! @ sweetie... thanks a lot for sharing ur thoughts... any sorts of comments, suggestions, thoughts are always welcomed on my threads! @ amit... yea i like the way u changed the words. thanks!
Hey #iR@ .... that was a nice one .... i liked this part ... very true .... fantastic :nw: .. .it seems that u r not such a gandi bacchi after all ..
@ vishwa... HI BRO... u back! great to hear from u! @ nimitr.... thanks a lot man! even i luv that stanza could everyone stop calling me GANDI BACHI!
