VoIcEs - Hey its been long.......but this was due

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by idefixe, Oct 2, 2006.

  1. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Voices in my head
    Always telling me things
    Facts that I don’t know
    Reasons that I can’t see
    Embed in the eerie corners
    Always devoid of light
    A clear conscience not ready

    Conflicting realities leave a trail
    Leave me cold in the dark
    Leading to a different way
    A different sense of being
    Things I believe in
    Gone for a toss
    Making me look frail
    More than I am

    Craving calmly,
    For something unknown
    Looking outside
    And inside the own
    Never ending stairways
    Lead me nowhere
    Feel, I’ve moved
    But haven’t progressed
     
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  2. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hello.......is anyboby in there......need a few comments....its me guess u guys have forgotten
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Craving calmly,
    For something unknown
    Looking outside
    And inside the own
    bahuut achhe .......this is a nice piece of work...just thoda sound effects kam hai ....i mean the theing is too plain in reading....vaise reps added !
     
  4. SG1

    SG1 "Brown Jesus"

    amazing man ... just the kind of stuff i like .. hate that luvy duvy stuff ... yukh ... Good work dude .. Reps for you.
     
  5. idefixe

    idefixe New Member

    Hey...thanks people for the appreciation.......this was keeps us going

    @madhuresh thanks for the reps

    @SG1thanks 2 u too.....and keep the reps comin
     

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