Unwell The void within me screams I look I see Nothing Dying dreams within my mind Dead Never shall rise Again Blood and poison run As brothers Together Forever Nameless fears threaten my being Irrational Illogical but Deadly Hatred is my ally Faithful Dependable Always I wait for you here To slash To kill I wait This prison stifles me Choking me Slowly i begin to Die Release me from my fate Give me freedom Liberate my soul I am not insane Merely a product of society Unwell Not insane Heed my pleas or I rest. This is just stupid. I was writing a psych paper and one thing led to another. I sort of use IGT as my online hard drive for my poems so i posted it. No analyses needed unless you really like me.
i really like u <3 for random thoughts put together, its good but when it comes to writing poetry you could've done better.
While writing psych paper? :think: What was it...u were describing clinical picture or what? But m glad it isnt ur state-of-mind put down to words..If u know what i mean As for poetry..ah i dunno! m just captivated by how u've described a certain frame of mind..rather a subject's frame of mind, if i can say that.Hmm, ur getting reps
Three girls really like me <3 All are my sisters *cries* Hehe. Thank you for your replies, as i said, it was a really horrible attempt and connecting images in a manic's head. T'wasnt a poem.
I'm a girl and I like you and I'm not your sister *blushes* I thought it was way too angsty and did not have enough content (or was too long for the content it had) Nameless fears threaten my being Irrational Illogical but Deadly These are lines I (and probably everyone else) can relate to in a scary way. I love them and you <3 Nameless fears threaten my being Irrational Illogical but Deadly
(or was too long for the content it had) ^ Perfect way of commenting Nice work ..i like such unrelated stuff which make no sense =)
I liked it..it made sense to me & oh yeah....U too <3 :grin: <-- smiley whch was dedicated espclly to U...
