Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Sep 15, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Yesterday isn't forgotten
    It's painful and alive
    How you just left
    While I had nowhere to hide
    So broke the window
    Through which I saw you leave
    In shreds and flames
    The dreams we weaved
    Now my hand's bleeding
    And I quite like the pain
    Atleast I don't have to
    Look at your face again
    The blood which flows
    Is perhaps the only sign
    That, still beating
    Is this heart of mine
    I take a piece of glass
    And cut away
    My eyes close
    On the floor I just lay
    In the distance I hear
    Someone knock on my door
    But I can't even get
    My face off the floor
    Everything's spinning
    And there's a banging in my head
    Or is it someone out there
    I can barely tell
    I open my eyes
    But can't really see
    But I still belong
    To who you used to be...
    aeg0, koolstrum and cYpHeR like this.
  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    kinda dark!
  3. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    cool one....i wanna run a google on dis one two b4 givin u reps :p:
  4. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    ^then do so^ CID Inspector Cypher ...
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    u can definitely do that cypher, no worries! i dont believe in plagiarism!!
  6. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    ok...brilliant stuff...and original too...reps..
  7. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thnx :) i guess i'll keep em coming then!
  8. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    my first poem on igt.. :)

    now that u ppl know me better, i felt that u all should read it, it's one my favs.....
  9. wolfblitz

    wolfblitz New Member

    what A poem!
    ur best yet
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    rockin yaar........ur poem has a thme always..nice goin....i hadnt read this....
  11. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @wolf, abhi

    thnx guys :)
  12. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    "But I still belong
    To who you used to be..."

    wow :nw: ...you really have a way of transfering the mood of the poem into the reader...your closing lines on your poems are so effective and most powerful lines...i really like this poem...i can see why its your favorite...i find it flawless...no wonder someone wanted to google it....good job crypti...! :beer:
  13. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned

    Superb cryptiii.. but why Untitled... name it..
  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!


    thnx :) that's nice to hear coming frm a really good poet :beer:


    thnx, i couldnt think of a title then.. n i usually dont edit my poems once i've written them, smhow cant... same goes for the title..
  15. Ankur_Scorpio

    Ankur_Scorpio New Member

    wow! if there is one poem on IGT tht forced me to click the reply button....its this one!!

    keep these types comin....
  16. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    thnx a lot ankur :)
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  17. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    accha hai...y didnt i read it earlier....chalo der aaye durust aaye ...thake thake sust aaye ...reps added
  18. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    Wow :shock:
    Deep. Intense. And bleeding with emotion.
    hehe.. :nw:
  19. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    hey this was ur first ..... tera gada murada ukhada maine ..hahaha
  20. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Cryptu honey, what i am, i was since ever, what you are, i am fighting to be. That should explain my attitude towards your poem.

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