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Yesterday isn't forgotten
It's painful and alive
How you just left
While I had nowhere to hide
So broke the window
Through which I saw you leave
In shreds and flames
The dreams we weaved
Now my hand's bleeding
And I quite like the pain
Atleast I don't have to
Look at your face again
The blood which flows
Is perhaps the only sign
That, still beating
Is this heart of mine
I take a piece of glass
And cut away
My eyes close
On the floor I just lay
In the distance I hear
Someone knock on my door
But I can't even get
My face off the floor
Everything's spinning
And there's a banging in my head
Or is it someone out there
I can barely tell
I open my eyes
But can't really see
But I still belong
To who you used to be...

 

kinda dark!

 

cool one....i wanna run a google on dis one two b4 givin u reps :

 

^then do so^ CID Inspector Cypher ...

 

u can definitely do that cypher, no worries! i dont believe in plagiarism!!

 

ok...brilliant stuff...and original too...reps..

 

thnx i guess i'll keep em coming then!

 

my first poem on igt..

now that u ppl know me better, i felt that u all should read it, it's one my favs.....

 

what A poem!
ur best yet

 

rockin yaar........ur poem has a thme always..nice goin....i hadnt read this....

 

@wolf, abhi

thnx guys

 

"But I still belong
To who you used to be..."

wow :nw: ...you really have a way of transfering the mood of the poem into the reader...your closing lines on your poems are so effective and most powerful lines...i really like this poem...i can see why its your favorite...i find it flawless...no wonder someone wanted to google it....good job crypti...! :beer:

 

Superb cryptiii.. but why Untitled... name it..

 

@tumhare_divya

thnx that's nice to hear coming frm a really good poet :beer:

@vishwa

thnx, i couldnt think of a title then.. n i usually dont edit my poems once i've written them, smhow cant... same goes for the title..

 

wow! if there is one poem on IGT tht forced me to click the reply button....its this one!!

keep these types comin....

 

thnx a lot ankur

 

accha hai...y didnt i read it earlier....chalo der aaye durust aaye ...thake thake sust aaye ...reps added

 

Wow :shock:
Deep. Intense. And bleeding with emotion.
Cryp, I LLOOOOVVEEEE YOOUUUU!!
hehe.. :nw:

 

hey this was ur first ..... tera gada murada ukhada maine ..hahaha

 

Cryptu honey, what i am, i was since ever, what you are, i am fighting to be. That should explain my attitude towards your poem.