Well, hello again. This one i wrote a couple of days ago. Didn't post it beacause i thought it was too raw. But now that i read it again, i feel the rawness is what makes it better. So here you go..By the way, i dunno what to call it, so help. Difficult to see you like this tears in the eyes that once brightened the bleakest of moods place myself beside you try as i may, can't find the courage that i must give to you Your silence, voices the obvious comfort others, suffer within wipe their tears, give them strength cry when alone, frail is hope Can't bear to watch you like this barely holding on, clutch it with all your might, you need to move on these wounds time will mend free of treason, but the hurt from within, seeks help from beyond We're all mortal by body the soul inside is eternal eventhough you note his absence inside you know, he's with you.....always.... Finally you break your silence that assures me you've found strength from within yourself, share it with those around he'll be there to guide you, always watching over you There to right every wrong thats been made help your way through the thorns in your path face adversity, celebrate your triumph he'll be there to guide you, always watching over you...
How come i wasnt the first to get to read this? You never showed it to me!:, Apart from that, very good poem Looking forward to more than you
Thanks both of you. Sorry sharath, i just decided to post it now. Very instantaneous. And zoom, yeah the title sounds cool, mysterious. But im thinking, it might mislead people. Lets see. Thanks anyway.
nice one, dude... waiting eagerly for you to title it... I usually title my poems b4 i write the first line even... just gives me the kicks.
Thanks guys. @maverick - That somehow never works for me. When i do that i lose interest in the middle and stop it. @Rizaaj - Glad you liked it so much. Thanks. And yeah, its is still. Any suggestions?
Bad at suggesting titles, so i'll keep my mouth shut. But then, see bro, you're a good poet, you should write more often.(For all who dont know, tejas is an over-modest guy, please encourage him so that he continues writing these beautiful pieces of poetry).
