Unconscious Future

was reading vini's "that glass door"...when i got some thoughts,and wrote this..thanks vini.

 

The past we have trampled
The present is weak
But when future is unconscious
All our hope are meek

Beautiful lines !!
Well done..

 

^^yay finally..i got a reply...thanks varshita..i like those lines too..

 

:rock: :rock: nice one hardik :rock: :rock:

 

Thanks amit...

 

Marvelous! well done man!

 

reminds me of the dialogue from Rang De Basanti .... "ek pair past mein, ek pair future mein , aur aaj pe hum M*** rahe hain" : .....

Hardik dude dont mind i liked ur poem though trust me ...

 

"The past we have trampled
The present is weak
But when future is unconscious
All our hope are meek

Let the unconscious awaken
Let the waves sweep past
Through every new nurtured life
Let God's realm last."

liked the last two stanza's
and dude i really liked the title..
each word revolves round the main theme

there are some entwined meanings..or maybe its me thinking a lot:

 

Beautiful lines...
Keep it up buddy..

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

@hira,nimitr,..thanks a lot

@martina...you thinking in da right direction ...thanks a lot

@zoom...thanks buddy

 

Lovely poem got some deep lines...!I loved it

 

^^thank you..

 

Thank God! for once i am thinking in the right direction!

Cant rep you

 

^lol...its k,..you replied,thats enough for me..

 

i couldnt understand it earlier but now after reading the comments of ppl got it...yeh to bahutt hi acchi kalpana hai mitr...saadhoo saadhoo

 

^thanks madhuresh...