Came up with this aftr a long time.... Ummeed kahan tak kheench layee hai hamein Kuchh kadam aur bache hain Waqt ke is morh par Yaad aa rahein hain wo saare lamhein Koshish to bohot kii Manzil ko pane kii Par har kadam par Kinara duur jata raha Koshish to bohot kii Haar ko gale lagane kii Par har kadam par Ek anjana chehra hosla badata raha Himmat kahan tak kheench layee hai hamein Bas kuchh hi lamhein aur bache hain Waqt ke is morh par Yaad aa rahe hain wo saare apne. Koshish to bohot kii Un apno ko khush rakhne kii Lekin har kadam par Ek chhota sa ghum dil ko dukhata raha Hamein khushiyon ki ehemiyat yaad dilata raha Thanks for reading .....
nice one corrections ...... 4th verse first line.......... 'kayee' should be i gueess 'laayee' and the last verse 2nd last line.......i think it would sound much better 'Ek chhota sa ghum dil ko dukhata raha' reps for u (LK) :
I I Sir... made the corrections.... Thank You for being the first one to reply....(with some corrections) Thank you for reps (LK)
app ne naya and fresh thouth try kiya Mugamboo kush huaa... Koshish to bohot kii Haar ko gale lagane kii Par har kadam par Ek anjana chehra hosla badata raha WAh kyaa baat hai ...baat nikli hai to DUUR talak jayegi ..loog bevajha udaasi ka sabab puuchenge.....Sincerly fresh attempt....
came up after long time..matlab?? oh haan..mobile mein save karke rakhi hogi..haan? anyways..very nice poem!! reps faaaaar u!
garri...this is very very good...especially liked the following lines... Koshish to bohot kii Haar ko gale lagane kii Par har kadam par Ek anjana chehra hosla badata raha I can feel the power of these words...
@Nimisha ....thanks @Pamposh....hope that frnd comes bk....if u want him to ...: @Abhi....aftr a long time yaar....where hv u been? @Vini....hehehe....pol khol eh?? @Romeo...dint get u actually....do u want to use it in ur composition ? if yes, then u can... @Amit....Thank you buddy......
