...I HOPE..U GUYZ WONT LEAVE WRITING POETRY AFTER READING THIS.. ... i aiNT no pOeT n i CaNt wRTIe.... well...poetry..is a combination of words..n phrases.. dat can make..u turn pages n pages.... it uses...some topic or showz u sm matter... n den keeps u busy xplainin..everything bout da latter... some...give..you...wheels.n some give u ..wings... but...they keep u glued 2 dem..till da fat lady sings... through poems...v can visualise our dreams.... lik..sittin.in india..v can njoy uk's creamz... in poems..u potray things ure way.... n u show da reader the enter-doorway... they come. they see..they feel ure viewz... appreciate..anticipate n get..entangled in ure matrix of hues... u make them...think..u make them cry.... n make them shameful of ill deeds.. they were goin 2 try... hmm....in short this is poetry..n u all shud write... so..sit down...jot.down... n let go ure imagination kite... # # copyright @ 2007. ansh.... ~ anshammer.inc ....
hmmmmm. hmmmmmmmmmm........ dats all i gotta say... just one advice.. if u rite seriously u can actually rite well... hehe...
Ok considering its your first or that you're new to poetry..this one is good..you can improve a lot though.. "through poems...v can visualise our dreams.... lik..sittin.in india..v can njoy uk's creamz... some...give..you...wheels.n some give u ..wings... but...they keep u glued 2 dem..till da fat lady sings..." don't try to force rhymes..I think that'll change your poetry drastically:dance:
hey....THANKS..and SORRY. CRYPTIC_ANGEL... hehe.... hmmmmmmm... thnx.. hira.. rohan .. not_neo..... hmmmmm..will try 2 write seriously...!!! widout "" .... ""..nd no forced rhymings... take care.... cya.! n yess..."" I AINT NO POE...N I CANNOT WRITE.!! "
I AINT NO POE...N I CANNOT WRITE.!! You mention that in your next poem and I'm not even going to bother to scroll down..:dance:
oops..... who said.. i aint no poet???.... I AM A POET... N IM TRYIN 2 WRITE.!!! I HOPE ITS BETTER..NOW.. ..SORRIE...
:beer: thanks .... n haan... need 2 tell ya.... ure a grr8 dancer... jahan dekho.u start.. :dance: hehe...... kiddin..
If you ever realize pain Of an incomplete romance You'll know why my 2 left feet always try to dance :dance:
i....never..gonna dance..again... guilty...feet hv got no rhythm... though.its easy 2 pretend... i kno ure not a fool .. nice lines na.... take care... keep :dance: njoy.!!!
haha bro..the hell with forced rhymes..this was damn enjoyable...keep writing.. though the dream and cream rhymes give me a laugh,I think this one was good..had fun:dance:
