Two Original Compositions

Hi guys, wrote two songs:

Hi Guys, wrote this song sometime ago -

Dheere Dheere - Tarun Betala [New Song - Hindi/Indian] - YouTube

Tarun Betala - Hoon Yahan Main (New Hindi / Indian Song) - YouTube

Would love to hear your thoughts

 

ur post is in wrong section..

 

btw ur dheere dheere song is gud ..but thoda chords repetitive ho jata hai..n d song is not dat tight
am no biggie but just trying to convey u in a straigght manner..so hope u dont mind
n nice try man (Y)

 

I like the second one..