Today for the first time I entered the "Poetry and Lyrics Forum". Impressed and motivated by active members there, decided to begin my journey along with you all. Tumhe jo apna banana chaha pyar jo apna jatana chaha tum ye zaana samajh na sake kareeb aake bhi ruk na sake vo jo ek pal tha humein tumhe dekha tha dil ne mere kaha tha tumhe hi apnana tha shooru huaa silsila phir milne ka hasne ka roone ka gaane ka vo tumhari sharaartein, meri nasamjhiya abhi bhi zinda hein banke kahaniyaan nazdeek tumhare aana chaha dil ki baat batana chaha aakhon se aakhon ko shamzhana chaha bin lavzo ke pyar jatana chaha per, tum ye zaana samajh na sake kareeb aake bhi ruk na sake aaj bhi jab tumhari yaad aati hai dil ke darwaze pe dastak de jaati hai ek pal mein raangat laati hai pal bhar mein maayusi chod jaati hai Please comment....
nice one yaar...so with that reply of urs to write2madhur, it seems he 's correct...:-> hmm...daal mein kuch kaala hainnnnnn...
bhai log dal mein bahut kuch kala hai. bata amit kisse impress kar rahe ho not many girls here and i guess all girls are booked sabki lovey dowey poems phad ke mujhe lagta hai u dont have any chance dude. lol just kiddin