tribute to joyce--dharmatma clip

ive been workin on this piece for a while..
total finger pickin on this one..
nothin complex..just a simple tune dedicated to my late uncle joyce who had the patience to teach me stuff when i first started out on guitar..yea..and the sucky part is he died at the age of 27 arnd 4 years back.
i will be adding more to it..do tell me what u feel abt it..
i played parts of it in the igt meet i went to..so those present would remember some of it.
plz do give it a listen..

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Nice stuff.
The chords and the Arpeggios were perfect for a tribute song .
Liked the ending a lot .
You should perferebly go for a clean guitar tone for this song . Didnt like the muffled-up sound.

You did go slightly off-time on some of the chords and time intervels were also not uniform .
But overall . Nice . It did bring me to tears at some point

 

thanks..im still workin on it..
was just a rough clip..i tried to experiment with the timing a lil..

still lots of work to do on the song.

 

ill record a better version of the clip..and put it up..
with better tone and "timing"

 

Well Done man. That was really awesome. It had great feeling and soul. I really enjoyed listening to it. Cant really say anything bad about it. Well done reps to you. :nw:

 

thanks sridhar..

ive uploaded a better clip..and made some suttle changes..
do listen to it..

 

good one!!
good timings .. :beer:

 

the new one is good but i kinda liked the old one with the muffled sound better. Playing wise this is definitely better but i liked the sound of the first one better.

 

Hey nice one Dharmatma...!
I liked it..! :beer: reps for u if permit

 

Heard the old one yesterday night.
Sounded good. Nice compostition.

Sometimes teh guitar did go overboard in timing.

But whatever, I NV U too.

 

thanks for givin it a listen guys..

yea..i wanted to somethin diff..but the new clip is more "conventional" if i may say..
im still workin on the song..
i kinda liked the muffled sound better too..
but i guess right now..the notes should be heard clearly for u guys to comment on it..
and suggest on maybe how it could go..ill try to use them if i find them valid..

thanks for listenin.

 

awesome clip..

loved the arpeggois...timing was superb

there was a....sort of predictable feel to it
maybe because u played a part during the meet....dunno

overall a lovely piece of work

 

hmm..comin to think of it..ill practice this piece hard with the click track on.

 

thatz awesome .pls gimme the tabs:

 

@dharmatma, nothing less expected, you're one of the best guitarists i know ( i expect a sarcastic denial of course:grin

 

liked it.. too good..

 

hey .. simple n sweet guitarin .. great tune in da context .. TRIBUTE !!

 

Wont call it simple though.

 

that was beautiful...

 

I meant simple not playin wise ..