Toh Main Kahu

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Babydoll, Mar 9, 2006.

  1. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Jitni mohabbat mujhe hai tumse
    gar utna tumhe koi chahe toh main kahu

    Jo bebasi mujh main tere dur jaane se hai
    gar wahi tadap tujh main nazar aaye toh main kahu

    Badi mushqil se maine tumhe kiya hai apni lakeero main shamil
    gar esi tarha tu mujhe rab se maang laye toh main kahu

    Kabhi sakhti kabhi narmi kabhi dillagi to kabhi zillat bhi sahi hai teri
    gar tu bhi mujhe har rang main apnaye toh main kahu

    Ruswayi e duniya to kabhi tanakashi apno ki hai suni
    gar tu bhi ye sab meri khatir seh paye toh main kahu

    Jis tarha tere intezar main rehti hu main bezaar
    gar us tarha tum bhi kabhi jaag toh main kahu

    Ye fansana tune to likh diya hai lekin
    gar es ki gehrai ko koi samaj paye toh main kahu
     
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  2. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    tumne itana kuch kehdiyaa, abb main kya kahu....

    nice poem...
     
  3. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Tumne itna keh diya wahi mere liye bohot hai nims..
    thnks :nw:
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one ...par abhi tak pata nahi cahla ....gar aisa kuch hoo jaye to tu kahe gi kyaa ;)...
     
  5. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx madhuresh ..

    well toh main kahungi ke haa tumhe mujh se dil se mohabbat hai
     
  6. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again


    Toh kuch kaho toh.. toh main kahu? lekin kya
     
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    aapki poem pad ke yahi lagta hai ki

    aap bolti bahut hai....lol..kidding

    bahut achchae
     
  8. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    aree yaar Toh main kahu ke maane hai ke " Toh main maanu "
     
  9. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    sahi pehchana lol :)

    Chalo kisi ne to maana ke acha likha hai thnx :nw:
     
  10. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again


    Kuch samazh mein nahi aaya.. Shero shayari mein thoda weak hoon.. jaane deejiye par ab mat kehna hehehehehe.
     
  11. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @baby....yaar u cant say "kisi ne to kaha accha likha hai" chek all ur posts ...banda humesha hajiri deta raha hai ...

    main to samajhta tha tu ladki hai...ye "sachooo" ka kyaa matlab hai ?
     
  12. sachoo

    sachoo drenched in my pain again

    agar main ladki hoon toh tu dhakkan hain (too optimistic). sachoo >> nick of sachin.
    ab samzhe mannu baba..

    :beer:
     
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    your last two lines sum up my comments

    "Ye fansana tune to likh diya hai lekin
    gar es ki gehrai ko koi samaj paye toh main kahu"


    lovely lines girl:)
     
  14. Babydoll

    Babydoll New Member

    Thnx once again madhuresh :nw:
    N bubbly Martini :nw:
     

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