Time Machine

The tune is ready yrs back, but somehow never recorded this yet:

Rewind

I take a walk down memory-lane, into yesterday
I see the things that I said, and the things that I just couldn't say
As I turn the pages, of this book that everyone calls 'Life'
I see the lovely days, the days when everything was right here...
...trapped in my hand....
...then why'd it have to trickle down,
like little grains of sand.......
Sand-clocks....are ticking out my time...
...and I still don't know what to do


I take a trip down time-machine to take a look at my past
I see the chasm of drift between us, a rift so vast
As I set the wheels of time in motion, and make a trip down time
I see the wasted days, the wasted years, the wasted time of my life...
...ain't a bed-of-rose anymore...
...And I just feel like crying out, loud behind shut door....
...Door-bells are ringin in my mind...
...and I still don't know what to do

 

It's so cool. I like it alot.
What genre is this song gonna be?

 

Thanks dude!

I guess its just another sad lil song....am using just my acoustic guitars, plugged into my processors maybe....will be a soft acoustic song - tag it rock or pop whatever - if Adams can qualify as soft rock, I guess even this can

 

How about making an Alternative rock version and a Pop/Rock versions of this song after your done with what you've planned to do?

 

haha...i`m always mixed on my opinions on the genres....i have this one version ready....if u wanna dig out another one outta tht, plz feel more than free...will record this song the way I wrote it this weekend - shall pm u then!

 

simple words, deep meaning..
all in all great work. reps for ya

 

Thanks for the reps!

 

Here is the recorded song I promised!

https://indianguitartabs.com/showthread.php?p=301246#post301246

 

good work ..cud have been better...

take a trip down time-machine to take a look at my past
I see the chasm of drift between us, a rift so vast

"As I set the wheels of time in motion, and make a trip down time"....u repeated the same thing so..here's a window of opportunity also if u look closely for adding another dimension...mile to batana nahi to bhi

 

luved the lyrics! good work man! :rock:

 

very nice topic and u did justice to it...why didnt i read it before!! and would love to listen to it as well!! will do later..for sure!

very nice..reps reps reps :nw:

 

great song... i saw the lyrics and i liked it.. i heard the song and i loved it... i specially liked the meaning of the whole song...