Time Machine - A new original - check it out!

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by geniusoid, Nov 21, 2006.

  1. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    TIME MACHINE

    I take a walk down memory-lane, into yesterday
    I see the things that I said, and the things that I just couldn't say
    As I turn the pages, of this book that everyone calls 'Life'
    I see the lovely days, the days when everything was right here...
    ...trapped in my hand....
    ...then why'd it have to trickle down,
    like little grains of sand.......
    Sand-clocks....are ticking out my time...
    ...and I still don't know what to do


    I take a trip down time-machine to take a look at my past
    I see the chasm of drift between us, a rift so vast
    As I set the wheels of time in motion, and make a trip down time
    I see the wasted days, the wasted years, the wasted time of my life...
    ...ain't a bed-of-rose anymore...
    ...And I just feel like crying out, loud behind shut door....
    ...Door-bells are ringin in my mind...
    ...and I still don't know what to do

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    Well not actually a new recording - did this scratch recording in 2005 I think...still pending since long to do a re-run with new effects and a pending lead solo for the song....takers welcome!

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=565809

    Needless to say, constructive feedbacks are more than welcome...

    Remember tht I`m not a singer, so I dont care if u didnt like the vocals - tell me abt the composition....
     
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  2. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    13 viewers. Zero feedback.

    Score so far: 13 : 0 :(
     
  3. radicalz_adi

    radicalz_adi New Member

    kewl gr88888.......yur lyrics?? gud ones
     
  4. .:SpY_GaMe:.

    .:SpY_GaMe:. New Member

    forgot to reply shit


    well overall nice work if we consider the lyrics + guitaring !!!


    repped u
     
  5. getshorty80

    getshorty80 New Member

    nice one there dude keep it up
     
  6. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Heard it man.
    Liked it, but am not in my mind right now.
    Will post later
     
  7. good one geniusoid... i like lyrics and guitaring.. and bout ur vocals u can improve it... aint too bad..
     
  8. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    Thanks for the feedback, guys! :) Yeah i`ll do a better recording soon...
     
  9. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    im usually too lazy to check out org compositions..but was really intrigued to check urs after reading the lyrics in poetry forum...hmm quite nice..u have a darren hayes"ish" kinda voice..awesome effects and music..some room for improvement is there as i think u were struggling a little to fit the words in music..i dunno, maybe i wrong..but just tellin what i think..re-record someday if u want.

    good going man!
    reps for sure (after spreading)
     
  10. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    nice work man! luv the lyrix! :rock:
     
  11. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    @everyone.... thanks :) :cheers:
     

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