This one is for my brother...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Mar 2, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Hi guys...
    Today is my brother's birthday...just few minutes left for it to get over....i took him for shopping...& he made me spend half of my salary :mad: :cry2:...but anyway, he is still a sweetheart...evn aftr all those tantrums....
    he dint like when i was coming to office, but I had no choice :mad:...so while I was coming to office...in the cab I wrote a poem for him...& cried too when i was writing it :eek::...wont evr tell him that I wrote a poem for him....chane ke jhaad pe chad jaega....
    So, m posting it here...u ppl mite b able to relate urself to this....


    Ladte jhagadte
    Kitne saal beet gai
    Roothna manana
    Sab ateet ho gai

    Wo lamha jab maine tujhe chhua
    Mujhe ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hua….
    Ki ab mai is duniya me akeli nahi hoon….

    Wo chhoti chhoti aankhoan se tu mujhe dekhta hua
    Mujhe yaad hai tera wo masoom chehra muskurata hua
    Us baat ko aj bhi mai bhooli nahi hoon


    Dekhte dekhte saal beet gai
    Ma Pa ko tang karte karte ham itne bade ho gai
    Aj bhi wo chhoti chhoti shararatein yaad hai mujhe

    Pata hi nahi chala kab ham bhai-behen se dost ban gai
    Ehsaas hi nahi hua ki kab khushiya baant-te baant-te ham ek doosre ke gam bhi samet gai
    Aj bhi wo hansi, wo dard mehsoos hota hai mujhe


    Ab jab kuchh saaloan me mai duur chali jaungi
    Ummeed hai mujhe ki tab bhi tujhe yaadoan ke bahane khoob sataungi :p:
    Meri har ek cheez ko sambhal ke rakhna ghar me :mad:

    Jab kabhi yaad aaye meri to dil se pukar lena
    Jahan kahin bhi hungi, apne bhai ki awaz sunkar bhagi chali aaungi
    Yeh ehsaas hamesha rahega tere pass ki koi apna hai is duniya me…



    comments/no comments chalega :cool:
     
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^You are my sister from now on......write a poem for me:p:
     
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    lol....samjh le tere liye bhi hai....:grin:
    thanks for reading :)
     
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Jolly good work, I HATE THIS REP SYSTEM~!~
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    :)cute ..sweet..lovely poem
    although i'm the younger one..
    brothers will be brothers forever:)

    could relate to one para..and damn its also touching..i got a lump in the throat:cry1:


    PS- I hate being a cancerian!
     
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Y???? my all gud frnds are cancerian....:shock:
     
  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Damn..i'm libran....
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^ummmmm....actually...most of my crushes were Libran :eek::
     
  9. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh:rock: :banana:
     
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    cancerians are very sentimental..
    anythin and everything gets them welling up
    unpredictable and many other things..but anwys thats only a few of them i guess:eek::
     
  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^:shock: my best frnd is cancerian....&not at all sentimental....but practical....I always wanted to adapt that frm her...but i guess...m too bad for that :eek::
     
  12. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^I guess she came out early........maybe she war'nt supposed to be a cancerian..
     
  13. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&


    :sick: ?

    :annoyed:
     
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    touching !!... I dont have a brother and i always longed for one. Have made a few now :)
    But yes i can relate to it for my sis... shaadi ke baad bhi peecha nahi chod rahi :mad:
    Miss her like anything n hate her like anything. :)
    I m gonna cry now :cry2:
    Good one garima..

    offtopic .. I m a piscean.. n my best friends have always been Librans !!
     
  15. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Yes, you have a sick mind, when i said "Whoah" it meant i was proud to be part of a sun sign which she had so many crushes on. Just means we're better.
     
  16. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    Wonderful poem!!!
     
  17. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Another one for the Librans :rock: :rule:
     
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Varshu....mujhe lag raha hai mera bhai bhi yehi bolega kuchh years baad yehi bol raha hoga....:eek::

    @Sarat...don't mind yaar....wo uski aadat hai....

    @Ansh....thanks for reading :grin:
     
  19. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^No problem sis :grin:
     
  20. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    Aye aye :super-sick:
     

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