Hi guys... Today is my brother's birthday...just few minutes left for it to get over....i took him for shopping...& he made me spend half of my salary :cry2:...but anyway, he is still a sweetheart...evn aftr all those tantrums.... he dint like when i was coming to office, but I had no choice ...so while I was coming to office...in the cab I wrote a poem for him...& cried too when i was writing it :...wont evr tell him that I wrote a poem for him....chane ke jhaad pe chad jaega.... So, m posting it here...u ppl mite b able to relate urself to this.... Ladte jhagadte Kitne saal beet gai Roothna manana Sab ateet ho gai Wo lamha jab maine tujhe chhua Mujhe ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hua…. Ki ab mai is duniya me akeli nahi hoon…. Wo chhoti chhoti aankhoan se tu mujhe dekhta hua Mujhe yaad hai tera wo masoom chehra muskurata hua Us baat ko aj bhi mai bhooli nahi hoon Dekhte dekhte saal beet gai Ma Pa ko tang karte karte ham itne bade ho gai Aj bhi wo chhoti chhoti shararatein yaad hai mujhe Pata hi nahi chala kab ham bhai-behen se dost ban gai Ehsaas hi nahi hua ki kab khushiya baant-te baant-te ham ek doosre ke gam bhi samet gai Aj bhi wo hansi, wo dard mehsoos hota hai mujhe Ab jab kuchh saaloan me mai duur chali jaungi Ummeed hai mujhe ki tab bhi tujhe yaadoan ke bahane khoob sataungi : Meri har ek cheez ko sambhal ke rakhna ghar me Jab kabhi yaad aaye meri to dil se pukar lena Jahan kahin bhi hungi, apne bhai ki awaz sunkar bhagi chali aaungi Yeh ehsaas hamesha rahega tere pass ki koi apna hai is duniya me… comments/no comments chalega
cute ..sweet..lovely poem although i'm the younger one.. brothers will be brothers forever could relate to one para..and damn its also touching..i got a lump in the throat:cry1: PS- I hate being a cancerian!
cancerians are very sentimental.. anythin and everything gets them welling up unpredictable and many other things..but anwys thats only a few of them i guess:
^^^:shock: my best frnd is cancerian....¬ at all sentimental....but practical....I always wanted to adapt that frm her...but i guess...m too bad for that :
touching !!... I dont have a brother and i always longed for one. Have made a few now But yes i can relate to it for my sis... shaadi ke baad bhi peecha nahi chod rahi Miss her like anything n hate her like anything. I m gonna cry now :cry2: Good one garima.. offtopic .. I m a piscean.. n my best friends have always been Librans !!
Yes, you have a sick mind, when i said "Whoah" it meant i was proud to be part of a sun sign which she had so many crushes on. Just means we're better.
@Varshu....mujhe lag raha hai mera bhai bhi yehi bolega kuchh years baad yehi bol raha hoga....: @Sarat...don't mind yaar....wo uski aadat hai.... @Ansh....thanks for reading :grin: