The Teardrop

The teardrop; it sprayed out a rainbow from within.
It echoed a much deeper pain.
Below the eye it hung, quivering.

It held nothing as it rolled down the cheek
Ominously dragging the mascara with it;
Not wanting to be alone.

Chilling jaws of the wind blew it away,
Freezing it before it fell any lower.

I caught your eye and we smiled;
The agony shattered like the tear that splattered on the ground.

 

That's really good. It's quite vivid and imaginative.
Good going..

 

I think this is really well-written. You've created a very real image in my head with your words. Does spraying out a rainbow allude to a ray of light falling on the tear?

 

Yes. It exactly indicates that.
Also, a rainbow is something that is related to happiness. So it was a bit ironic too.

 

oh, I thought by rainbow you meant many sorrows effusing out.

Its very good, vivid, as bjr said!.