The Prison

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by tumhare_divya, Jul 6, 2005.

  1. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    (a poem i wrote today after another sad moment in my life...i keep a diary...but instead of notes...i write one poem each day expressing my emotion for the day...i felt like sharing today's....)

    My soul's locked in a prison a prison of my fears....
    A prison surrounded by a moat full of tears....
    my tears are unseen but are continually shed...
    and are absorbed by the pillows as i cry on my bed...
    my prison has a lock and i am seeking the key...
    the key that will let me set my soul free...
    once free from my prison i must cross that teary moat...
    by which way am i destined to cross?..by bridge or by boat?
    the bridge crosses the moat without touching the tears...
    the boat must row through them.. reminding me of past years...
    my day to be free is still really far....
    so for right now i find my peace through poetry and guitar....
     
  2. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    hey nice but sad poem. what happened today, chechi? are u okay? plz call me if you can. u seem very depressed.
     
  3. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    good piece of work there!i like the poem very much andc the rhyme.kepp up da good work.
     

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