The Moist View I See someone sitting by the bedrest with her hands covering the face. Drops and more drops appear from those moist yet parched eyes and disappear somewhere.. The eyes of emptiness now staring at the walls. Answers they seek and have grown up waiting for 'em to come along. I see those eyes frisking through the pages of Bible..thinking it might give some clue but the scripture beams blank instead, just like those blank eyes so blue. This Blankness is so evident and omnipresent, but still those eyes serve the blankness daily without a fail, by washing it with all the dew filled inside. Yes, i still see those eyes staring at the dumb, unanswerable walls and have continued to do so for years. When will these eyes recieve something save the Water?? "Now thats another question, dont you know questions are never answered" affirms my soul. So, tired i break that mirror and leave the bedrest.
i really did not understand this poem yaar....its really good but it went over ma head.......u wrote a magical poem haan but...
well, i was expecting..sumthing like this. either the nature of my work is ambiguous or u need to gather more cells to decipher it or its too state-of-mindish :| but thanx, both of u!
Tum kaun ho mahan bande u write really really well.... see if this is close Ruk aa saans shoor mat kar, vaqut hai ibaadat ka ye dheere bhi nahi band ho dhakan mujhko-akeela sehne de main pahuch kar aa gaya uss ke dar se phir yahi kehna uski aadat nahi to buut ko buut hi rehne de !! buut :- means mujassama/statue of a deity,god
kitna mana kartee rahe yadoon ye gajha teri nahi banke ke phir paani bhe to rokna kyaa bhene de !! Ruk aa saans shoor mat kar, vaqut hai ibaadat ka ye dheere bhi nahi band ho dhakan mujhko-akeela sehne de !!
"its very easy to write complex but very difficult ot deal with it" this below 1 is not by me but very promptly expresses my thinking.. Koi aankhon aankhon se baat kar leta hai Koi aankhon aankhon mein mulakaat kar leta hai Bada Mushkil hota hai tab Jawab denA Jab koi KhamosH rehkar Sawaal kar leta hai................ ... baas keep posting
