The horse...feels !!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Jun 17, 2010.

  1. Away Away far far away
    It keeps getting boring with each passing day
    Sails the ship slow and steady
    Each day has its problems and every one is ready
    Some hows it’s a carnival a delusion a trance
    Evey one is lonely they greave then they dance
    Some keepers some jokers some making sounds
    And all animals just watching the merry go round

    The colt is a horse now and he has been sold
    He will now work his life long that he’s been told
    These journeys will never end from one port to next
    He will have to win races make money take test

    Just this time between the laps these short trips
    Where hes in the basement of big bottom ships
    Learns that the running and pushing is a worthless game
    The crowd has just two words a praise or a shame
    So nothing to worry it matters to none
    those who don’t know you or who call u son
    All just counting and u have almost returned their spend..
    No use going further now this life needs an end
     
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  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    I just wonder, how each n every line connects with me, must be a damned big coincidence...
    Still, I liked these lines, JLT......

    Now,now this looks beautiful. Lets see if I can rep it.......
     
  3. suprita

    suprita New Member

    wow... its really nice n ders soo much of feel in each n every line... awesome!!!
     
  4. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    beautiful...i luv d way u hv described the feelings of dt horse...which itself can't spk but is making u spk its wrds
    @horsesmouth: i guess u cud relate it wid u coz of d description of the 'ship world'
    i didn't pay attention on the name of the poet/ess earlier....i thought u hd written this lol
     
  5. thanks all

    Im still alive..lol
     
  6. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    hey thts' a really nice poem......cheers!
     

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