No intro to this one.... Its a horrible feeling to sit aside the person you love the most knowing she gave you life it feels all so unjust. she's lived happy years And now she has grown old Age takes a bitter price And time always takes its toll. She sheltered me from the bad And even when I messed up things This angel took me under her wings. She's the reason I'm here Her milk runs in my veins I know I've caused her troubles but she never shows the pain. She's divine at least And even if there's food for one She'll starve herself Just to give me a feast. I hide my sorrow, Conceal my frustration She holds my hand with the serenity of the moon, the oracle she says,"It'll be over soon" I can't help it any longer I burst out and cry As I realize the horrible truth That even angels can die.
^^Thank you *forgets modesty* No but that really did feel good to hear..because that is what I always want my poems to be..
this is like a real from the heart effort,,u actualy lived this moment...u knw the most common shape in world is parabola(not a circle) things grow very fast rise and plummet quickly, so are the pattersns of emotion ... ....regained life........love.................death.... so actually any one can rite about love and all but with the feelings on either side of spectrum like death...u can judge was it felt or observed ...pata nahi ?? i shud not poke here right so forget it ...Awsome poem !
wow... this was some awesome poem... i mean u have expressed so well by using such simple words and since u have talked about something dat happens wid everyone... u just reminded me of something that nearly made me cry... ANYWAY so the poem was just :nw: and u know it tou theres no point in telling u again and again! ^something i think about everynight before sleeping...
:shock: when did I get so many comments on this??!!! Well anyways,I'm very glad you all liked it...I mean okay,the composition wasn't exactly perfect but still the poem did have an impact..thank you every1... @madhuresh...madhuresh yes parabola true...I used to believe life is more like an ellipse though..lets not get into geometry []No this poem is based on observation or imagination actually..thanks a lot... @maxeffect...nice nickname I must say...thanks a lot man... @#iR@.....simple words,did you say???thanks a lot..that means a lot to me..ohh made you nearly cry??again,sweet compliment..thank you (though I didn't want to get you sad or anything ) And lastly.....Hey!!!there is point in telling me again and again!!!!!!!don't you stop commenting.. :dance:
^^^hahaha...as much as I appreciate that,I think you got me all wrong...well not about the "you love praising" part ..lol...I meant keep replying in the rest of my posts, not this one again ...and well I said keep the comments coming...so I'm willing to take the negative ones too..(don't you post -ve comments :aggre: )..lol..: :dance:
^ lol... ok i got that part but i just felt like replying here again so i did! now i think i am close to getting banned! : "IF" incase that happens i'll kill u i swear! now i'll just :dance: ma way out...
hey..you caught the :dance: frenzy!!! lol..you are close to being banned..and by replying to that even I am: ...so if we both get banned it'll be the headline tomorrow.."Poets lose humanity and kill each other"...: And now I'm really going to stop..or we both will have to face a "horrible" ban : (yes I have a sack of corny jokes)... :dance:
