Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by esgallindeion, Nov 23, 2004.
yeah lets start , we'll get the rules as we go one ...
But what's the theme?
how abt nature
hmm.. nature is one of my fav things to write about as well... but in what sense?
loll , essi , i never knew u could ask so many questions and for all this while i was thinking i was the only one getting excited over here ,... j k
ok - we start with stream ( nature ) , as if you are sitting all alone near a stream , no props with you , just backing ur self on a shady tree enjoying the breeze and just thinking ....
the poem should be max of 20 lines ,
everyone will contribute one line at a time ,
essi you will have a right to delete any post which you feel does not make sense .
you start the first line and the thread will close after max of 20th line
- not sure if it will work accordingly , no harm in trying , lets go on ..
any suggestions , anyone ,...
hey i wanna join too
good , we will start the thread soon ,..
^Of course u can. The more the better.
@Essi, bob - okay, nature - stream huh, well it seems a little vague. If its only that, it'll be filled with imagery and not much subject. Well, but its upto u, since i can't think of anything better, just decide and i'll join in.
Well, ok we just let our creativity flow and see what we end up with... anyway, still sticking to the 24hrs (approx) deadline...
ok - tejas , i think it is a good concept , lets c how far our ppl can imagine !!!
essi - when do you intend to start the thread ?
Oh... i thought i had posted earlier... looks like i forgot... ok, we stick to Bobby's idea... but we let our creativity take control of the theme as we progress... So from now after 24 hrs (approx) if anyone has any other ideas, please feel free to post cuz after that we'll take bobby's idea and begin on it...
but one thing , NO SPAMMING HERE GUYS ....
so u feel 20 lines are okay is it ,..
lets keep it tentatively 20... i think we'll hve to be flexible and allow for changes as we proceed...
yeah , 3 to 5 lines up and down is okay i guess , so when do you intend to start the thread , u will have to think of the first line ,...
Like I said, tommorow...
cool, i m in...kinda looked at the thread a little later but i guess i m not late though
No, not late... no one's late... until the end.
Ok, I'll post the thread soon...
best of luck to you guys...i can't wait to see the final product...!!! :beer:
life never is the way you want it to be
things never are how you want them to be
at the end all you have is a favourite song
and a few memories to last life long
a rose is not to be blamed for having thorns
its you who is to be, for seeing thorns
let roses bloom bright and fair
let their fragrance spread in the air
time inflicts the deepest of wounds
time itself heals these wounds
but when you go too far
all you are left with, is just a scar.
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