The End

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Bristy, Apr 25, 2005.

  1. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    THE END


    I feel so alone in the world full of people,
    No one's ever there for me,
    Nobody's here.
    I wish today would be the end,
    If the world would just stop spinning,
    round and round and round,
    one day forever it would be much easier...............

    The words you said to me,
    Are still in my head like a blade pierced through my heart,
    The scares in my head just won't go away,
    I feel so happy for people who die,
    It's better than suffering in this world's life
    This is what i don't get about life
    Like a candle burning,
    Waiting for death's end to come it's way

    Without a second chance nor change,
    Life's but a walking shadow
     
    6string_addict and Subhro like this.
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Deep feelings mate!
    Great poem...
    Liked it a lot!

    Keep it up!

    REgards,
    Zooom..!!
     
  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    reps 4 u bristy :)
    as zoom put it.. deeeeeeep :)
     
  4. 6string_addict

    6string_addict * Addicted Guitarist * <img src="http://www.indian

    nice poem bristy... you can chk out my poem also..starting reminds mine....reps for you..
     
  5. Rey1970

    Rey1970 New Member

    Nice poem, keep it up , I like it.
     
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    gud one bristy.tats more or less my style of writing lyrics......
     
  7. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :&quot;(

    i'm sry. but shez da only 1 who getz da reps.
     
  8. hotobhaga

    hotobhaga GraMMaR GoD :p:

    orre baapzzz... ami etodin IGT browse 'e kortam na... I was just used to post threads in Bengali guitar tabs section... now I've started browsing IGT and found this.... very cool poem Brishty... gorgeous one...!
     
  9. Bristy

    Bristy ...

    Thank you all of you....
    I'm really glad you liked this one....And thanks once again...
    for your lovely encoragement....
     

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