Sequel to "Untimely Life" -The Awakening- Though etched on its tombstone the being believed it wasnt true masking its face it woke anew red angels flew past sniggering echoing in the emptiness it was lingering earth had nurtured the corpse corosively its skin stiffened and livened up following a path strewen with primroses aimlessly walking seeing the sky changing prinking itself clear it changed its color the sinuos road showed an end not far the air brought sounds a lute was heard playing faraway the music grew as it advanced through stopping at a closure the vibrations were out loud it arrived at its own requiem dumbfound ---`-,--;--<@ Not a recent poem but do gimme your comments good bad ..not very good jus be honest Thanks for reading..
tune kaiyee dinooon main likha to itni contunity kaise maintain ki..... Ek to ye ajeeb se khyaal ulje huee savaal vicharoon ka bavaal bhai par kamaal ki kamaal
Hello, I'm new to this group. Just wanted to let you know I enjoy your writings. VERY discriptive, you paint pictures with your words.
