-The Awakening-

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Jun 30, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Sequel to "Untimely Life"

    -The Awakening-

    Though etched on its tombstone
    the being believed it wasnt true
    masking its face it woke anew
    red angels flew past sniggering
    echoing in the emptiness it was lingering
    earth had nurtured the corpse corosively
    its skin stiffened and livened up
    following a path strewen with primroses
    aimlessly walking seeing the sky changing
    prinking itself clear it changed its color
    the sinuos road showed an end not far
    the air brought sounds
    a lute was heard playing faraway
    the music grew as it advanced through
    stopping at a closure the vibrations were out loud
    it arrived at its own requiem dumbfound


    Not a recent poem
    but do gimme your comments
    good bad ..not very good
    jus be honest

    Thanks for reading..
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    tune kaiyee dinooon main likha to itni contunity kaise maintain ki.....
    Ek to ye ajeeb se khyaal ulje huee savaal vicharoon ka bavaal bhai par kamaal ki kamaal
  3. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member

    Hello, I'm new to this group. Just wanted to let you know I enjoy your writings. VERY discriptive, you paint pictures with your words.
  4. #iR@


    great.... so u have always ritten so well! :) i mean u said this poem was old...

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