I see you standing there waiting for ur love In the breeze you look so fair like the sun so high above In your eyes, to strong to weep to see nothings arrived In your heart your tears did seep from emotion that you've thrived Of your pain met the covered sky as rain began to fall from sleep There you gave your final sigh Then for you nature did weep With your back to the clouds, you started your walk and followed your lonely road As your foot hit the ground, you started to talk to the person that never showed Every word u pressed to speak to you he did not reply Again of him your ears do seek no sound to hear but a cry A cry that could you only hear to you that is so near Can only be so far away, so far away as the sky THIS WAS THE BEST POEM I HAVE COME ACROSS WHICK MY FRIEND HAD MAILED.. ITS A FOWARD.. WISH I CUD COMPOSE SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORKS
Good attempt, but certainly NOT the best i've ever come across, a random selection from my friend's anthology could beat this poem hand's down, in fact here is one time snagged on the cliff hanger's dream a rainbow leap's distance from the edge of infinity my crystallized prism inside a snow-flake dream can i drift a little longer or will you pull me down again rift tide dancing below the drowned, swirling sun see me ride feel me... fly across the faded, attic-dusted sky. By Amber Schorr
Actually the author is male Here is the original post: https://www.netpoets.com/poems/stories/1337001.htm
Thanks man, I really appreciate the props! It has been a while since I have written (1999) but Im glad people out there still appreciate this.