This is my 3rd attempt here...plz comment on this one ... Thats it Thats it girl Now I got you You Used me all But now I caught you You told all lies And I bought You You talked all sugar All day I thought you You prepared the poison That i taught you But it was I who drank it It was not you Enough is enough It has to end here There is one more thing I want you to hear There are more levels My frustration can reach But I cut it short,so GO F.UCK YOURSELF BITCH!! Thanks for reading.......
u need to consult a psychiatrist.r u depressed ? antways niiiice.i can't even write three or four line
who's that person..u r refering too...??? ok.. thats none of my business... tellin bout poetry... its good attempt.. being frank... its just an attempt..
i reallyyyy liked it don't know why could be cause i am too emtional rite now or watever... but somehow ur short poem seemed to be really effective..... i exactly don't know why but i really liked it man! very nice! and hope u r over all the frustration.... reps comming ur way!
^^thank u for the feedback ppl...i know this one sucks...but was really frustrated that time...it happened to me long time back..its been almost 2 yrs we split up...but that day i saw her at a friends party,i felt like killin her then n there,but just went home,n i din want to damage anything,so wrote this:'( am not depressed or goin thru nething,i am over it now...i was over it in 3 months,but that day just seein her...u know.....oh,whatever...i promise i wont write such stupid stuff next time....
aahh...well thats explains a lot, dude. Life is a b.itch. And im sorry- Hope we start gettin to see some of your better poems soon!!!
i liked one of your earlier poems a lot yaar....."itz better in hell"......man....that was damn awesome..... ^^^^cryptic angel....well said.... ive went through loads of crap too......me and my gf broke up.......it was noone's fault actually.....but still....we are good friends today.....:grin:
@Knight_ki_gf..thanks for understanding,will do that next time.. @write2madhur...haha...could have done that to her,but din have a gun handy
Girls can be real b!itches sometimes.. : its a good poem.. to the point and the Right words! good u put it to paper..rather than doin something else Take care dude!
^^no dude,i dont wanna take revenge,i am a very nice guy u know..:grin: i know how i can take revenge,and make her pay bigtime,but i just dont wanna do it... things happen in life n you just cant do nethin bout them...some things are better left as they are....
hey thts a nice tot :shock: ps--->hardik sup wit u m8 senti q ho gaya : aray her bunday ko eak laaat zaroor padti hain koi tenssion nai u took 3 mnth to come out i took a yr n tht was worst
