" "that Glass Door" "

"that Glass Door"​

Although I'm almost a busy person, but i still find myself staring out of "that Glass Door"
Without a fail i go to stare out of "that Glass Door"

I know not, what these tired eyes seek
But all i know is that..these dried eyes do look about and peek

Silently i devote my time on its threshold. Only a li'l noise could be heard...that is of the sighs

I see the Sun living and dying each day
and so the time keeps flying each day

Why this poem is being written, i really am not certain
Just ensure that "that Glass Door" is visible to me and never falls a Curtain

Staring at "that Glass Door" has never answered a Question
I'd rather say..each time i go its way it feeds another Question

Every night or day when i'm done with all my chores
I get up from the couch to stand near my threshold and stare out of "that Glass Door...."

 

good one.........rather another nice thought...

 

I think you waiting for someone??? :think:
Anyways..nicely written..
Keep it up...

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

Oh my gawd !
"That glass door" actually inspired you to write a poem on "That glass door".
Had "that glass door" not been there.. we wouldnt have had vini writing this poem anyways!!
Loved the way you have used "that glass door"...

 

thanx guys...i'd made few mistakes/typo ^ plz check it out again..though u neednt post replies again

 

does that glass door really exist???

 

my poems are hardly imaginary..always real or oriented from real life..i mean my life!

 

wow vini...i feel some nice thoughts coming to my mind...u inspired me...
loved the poem...

 

knock knock...on the door...

please see "kahin ye aapka dil to nahi"

keep writting good stuff!!!

 

Step over the threshold, I swear
Your night shall turn to day.
Walk the line, you'll realize these clouds
are a lighter shade of grey.


Break the door, I promise you
It will clear your vision.
But once you're past, you'll see at last
You miss the bliss of indecision.

 

@hardik n amit
thanx guys!

@bjr
:think:

 

haha, don't mind me

 

its ok!!

whose lines were those anyway?

 

mine, of course.


edit: and inspired on the spot by yours

 

Ok..i'd say thanc in reply to that :

 

You shouldnt waste these lines by posting it in reply to other's work

post some of ur work (poetry)..man!!

 

^LOL.. nice way to bump the thread :grin:

Hmm.. somehow didn't like this one much, I do get what you mean to say, but I felt like it wasn't written very well.

Maybe the way you wrote it is just not my kinda thing

 

I don't because I'm not a great writer and am not really looking to improve...the will to write just isn't there anymore except for rare bursts. Now that I'm getting back into the music scene, I'll need some originals so will probably be posting some stuff soon.



and lines are never wasted.

 

^My inspiriation never checks my work.....:sad:

 

oh stop whining. Your inspiration has managed to find a life outside the internet :grin:

I've only been home for an hour all day....perhaps tomorrow.