" "that Glass Door" "

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  1. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    "that Glass Door"

    Although I'm almost a busy person, but i still find myself staring out of "that Glass Door"
    Without a fail i go to stare out of "that Glass Door"

    I know not, what these tired eyes seek
    But all i know is that..these dried eyes do look about and peek

    Silently i devote my time on its threshold. Only a li'l noise could be heard...that is of the sighs

    I see the Sun living and dying each day
    and so the time keeps flying each day

    Why this poem is being written, i really am not certain
    Just ensure that "that Glass Door" is visible to me and never falls a Curtain

    Staring at "that Glass Door" has never answered a Question
    I'd rather say..each time i go its way it feeds another Question

    Every night or day when i'm done with all my chores
    I get up from the couch to stand near my threshold and stare out of "that Glass Door...."
    Hardik and zoomingrocket like this.
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one.........rather another nice thought...
  3. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    I think you waiting for someone??? :think:
    Anyways..nicely written..
    Keep it up...

  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Oh my gawd !
    "That glass door" actually inspired you to write a poem on "That glass door".
    Had "that glass door" not been there.. we wouldnt have had vini writing this poem anyways!!
    Loved the way you have used "that glass door"...:)
  5. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    thanx guys...i'd made few mistakes/typo ^ plz check it out again..though u neednt post replies again ;)
  6. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    does that glass door really exist???
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    my poems are hardly imaginary..always real or oriented from real life..i mean my life! :)
  8. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    wow vini...i feel some nice thoughts coming to my mind...u inspired me...
    loved the poem...:)
  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    knock knock...on the door...

    please see "kahin ye aapka dil to nahi" :)

    keep writting good stuff!!!
  10. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Step over the threshold, I swear
    Your night shall turn to day.
    Walk the line, you'll realize these clouds
    are a lighter shade of grey.

    Break the door, I promise you
    It will clear your vision.
    But once you're past, you'll see at last
    You miss the bliss of indecision.
  11. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    @hardik n amit
    thanx guys!

  12. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    haha, don't mind me
  13. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    its ok!!

    whose lines were those anyway? ;)
  14. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    mine, of course.

    edit: and inspired on the spot by yours
  15. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    Ok..i'd say thanc in reply to that :p:
  16. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    You shouldnt waste these lines by posting it in reply to other's work

    post some of ur work (poetry)..man!! :)
  17. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^LOL.. nice way to bump the thread :grin:

    Hmm.. somehow didn't like this one much, I do get what you mean to say, but I felt like it wasn't written very well.

    Maybe the way you wrote it is just not my kinda thing :)
  18. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I don't because I'm not a great writer and am not really looking to improve...the will to write just isn't there anymore except for rare bursts. Now that I'm getting back into the music scene, I'll need some originals so will probably be posting some stuff soon.

    and lines are never wasted.
  19. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^My inspiriation never checks my work.....:sad:
  20. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    oh stop whining. Your inspiration has managed to find a life outside the internet :grin:

    I've only been home for an hour all day....perhaps tomorrow.
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