Thank you

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, May 2, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Destiny has its own sweet strange way
    Just when you think you’ve had enough
    A little more is put on your plate

    Puts you through test, your courage, your strength
    Closes all doors, turns away to silently watch
    What you do, how willing you are
    To go to great lengths

    You learn, you manage, and you are on your own
    When you give up all hopes
    Find him standing beside you
    Like your very own

    Neither the situation becomes any better
    Nor do the problems vanish away
    But, he bestows you with all the strength
    To smilingly walk past that way

    His words, his reassurance
    His smile, his warmth
    Gives comfort, solace
    Peace of mind for you to move on

    He gives you the pain, then takes it away
    Makes life seem like a child’s play
    One moment he chains you, other he sets you free
    Take time out from your busy lives to say
    “Thank you god for being there for me”
    BubblyMartini and vini like this.
  2. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    great stuff!
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks ansh :)
  4. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

    wow very nice.Reminds of a poem called 'Pulley' by George Herbert.
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks somesh
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ya nice try
    hum apne drama main ek line kehte .....some guys from delhi school of drama told me to say some hymes after practice

    Ek piyaali, aur do chai
    destiny hai hai...
    chota kurta, lambi tai
    destiny hai hai...

    haha saala kamine loog
    very well though and executed girl....
  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    thanks :-|
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  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Its always a pleasure to read ur creation :) & aftr so many days its like "WOW"....
    hope u just Keep Thanking God.....:grin:
  9. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Hey gud to have you back again.
    and always you are at your best...keep it up.
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM


    the last line is the sweetest!
    Varshu!!..i loved this poem..i could say it as a prayer..
    seriously, not trying to fool around..but the poem does look like a prayer
    and its beautiful!..
  11. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ garima... Well had written it a few days back, but didnt feel like posting. Today was relatively free, so thought why not. :)

    @walk alone.... not one of my best, but definately one written with best intentions
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ martina...Well its my own sweet prayer to say thank you to god, despite all the pain all the bad times. Cos If i have been able to come through that phase its all cos of him.
    So what better way than saying it through a poem :)
    btw... are you getting married?
  13. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    brilliant poem dear! atlast someone turned towards the Creator to thank him
    amazing lines!!!..i thank you for writing a poem for Him the Lord , our forgotten friend!..we should never forget Him atleast for the fear that what will happen if He forgets us.

    Very very nice..thanx a ton for sharing..and i second martina this poem itself could be used as a prayer...

    reminded of these lines>>
    REPS 4 U :)
  14. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ vini...Thanks a lot for those encouraging words. The reason I never posted it earlier was for the fear that I couldnt have and wouldnt let anybody say bad things abt it, as its not just a poem... its much more than that. Its a flow of thought.... of what I felt... and my way of remembering him and saying thanks to him :)
  15. nezavisnast

    nezavisnast Banned

    hi my name is nezavisnast i like ur poem too much your wonderful oh wow
  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you.
  17. nezavisnast

    nezavisnast Banned

    you r welcome
  18. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^ whoa! its great, u r really good at this yaar ....
  19. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    yeah D..thas awesome poem..loved it..and how will i miss urs....
  20. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thanks apurbjd and abhi. :)

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