Destiny has its own sweet strange way Just when you think you’ve had enough A little more is put on your plate Puts you through test, your courage, your strength Closes all doors, turns away to silently watch What you do, how willing you are To go to great lengths You learn, you manage, and you are on your own When you give up all hopes Find him standing beside you Like your very own Neither the situation becomes any better Nor do the problems vanish away But, he bestows you with all the strength To smilingly walk past that way His words, his reassurance His smile, his warmth Gives comfort, solace Peace of mind for you to move on He gives you the pain, then takes it away Makes life seem like a child’s play One moment he chains you, other he sets you free Take time out from your busy lives to say “Thank you god for being there for me”
ya nice try hum apne drama main ek line kehte .....some guys from delhi school of drama told me to say some hymes after practice Ek piyaali, aur do chai destiny hai hai... chota kurta, lambi tai destiny hai hai... haha saala kamine loog very well though and executed girl....
Its always a pleasure to read ur creation & aftr so many days its like "WOW".... hope u just Keep Thanking God.....:grin:
*bows* Sweet! the last line is the sweetest! Varshu!!..i loved this poem..i could say it as a prayer.. seriously, not trying to fool around..but the poem does look like a prayer and its beautiful!..
@ garima... Well had written it a few days back, but didnt feel like posting. Today was relatively free, so thought why not. @walk alone.... not one of my best, but definately one written with best intentions
@ martina...Well its my own sweet prayer to say thank you to god, despite all the pain all the bad times. Cos If i have been able to come through that phase its all cos of him. So what better way than saying it through a poem btw... are you getting married?
brilliant poem dear! atlast someone turned towards the Creator to thank him amazing lines!!!..i thank you for writing a poem for Him the Lord , our forgotten friend!..we should never forget Him atleast for the fear that what will happen if He forgets us. Very very nice..thanx a ton for sharing..and i second martina this poem itself could be used as a prayer... reminded of these lines>> REPS 4 U
@ vini...Thanks a lot for those encouraging words. The reason I never posted it earlier was for the fear that I couldnt have and wouldnt let anybody say bad things abt it, as its not just a poem... its much more than that. Its a flow of thought.... of what I felt... and my way of remembering him and saying thanks to him
