Teri aashiki ka nasha

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by amit82cse, Feb 10, 2006.

  1. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Teri aashiki ka nasha (recording added)

    Sometime you just can't stop it...

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya
    Bin piye o jaana, madhosh mein ho gaya

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya...

    Tera milna, yuin satana
    muskara ke, dil mein utarna
    batein banana, der se aana
    yuin sharma ke, pagal banana
    Tere zism ki khoshboo se, paimana jhalak gaya

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya
    Bin piye o jaana, madhosh mein ho gaya

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya...

    Teri yaadein, jab bhi aaye
    hosh mere, uda le jaaye
    aakhein na kholu, band lavo se
    tujh ko o jaana, har dam pukaaru
    Tere honto ki garmiyon se, maikhana jal hi jaaye

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya
    Bin piye o jaana, madhosh mein ho gaya

    Teri aashiki ka, ye nasha jo chad gaya...

    Hope you all will like this song :eek::
     
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Lovely,
    Rhyming structure could've been made a little more complex to make it more exotic.
     
  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    extreme of any thing is bad thats why just a shed.... :cool:
     
  4. sweetie

    sweetie New Member


    awesome.. :rock: .I liked it...


    aakhein na kholu, band lavo se
    tujh ko o jaana, har dam pukaaru
    Tere honto ki garmiyon se, maikhana jal hi jaaye


    Its wonderful my dear
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hey nice song:)

    have u recorded it..please post it if you have
    it would sound great with some music i feel

    nice work dude
     
  6. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks sweetie and bubbly
     
  7. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    AMAZING! :beer:
     
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks .. ir
     
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Good work... specially liked this...

    aakhein na kholu, band lavo se
    tujh ko o jaana, har dam pukaaru
    Tere honto ki garmiyon se, maikhana jal hi jaaye

    Kya baat hai !!
    Seriously hats off to u guys who can come up with such lovely expressions. I m glad i stopped writing or else i would have made a fool out of myself in front of you guys !! :)
     
  10. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks gf...

    you guys have always been my insperation so please dont stop writting :)
     
  11. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Here is recording of my song...


    Please do comment howz my composition and music.:eek::
     
  12. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

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