Tera Saath....

Tera mera yeh haseen saath,
Hatth mein mere…
Tera yeh haath….
Yun lagta hai mujhe
Jaise….
Saari khusiyaan aa gayin ho,
Aaj mere paas,
Tum hi to mera jeevan ho,
Tum hi ho meri saans.


Tere mere honth,
Jaise do komal kaliyaan.
Jab milte hain….
To jaise
Jaga dete hain ek anjaani….
Meethi, madhur pyaas.
Mehsoos karke in labon ko,
Jaag jaati hai…
Apne Milan ki aas.

Teri ungliyon ki…..
Woh makhmali chuvan
Woh naram sarsarahat,
Tan badan mein,
Mehsoos karke teri garmahat….
Karne lagti hai mujhe deewana
Aur lagne lagta hai….
Saara aalam,
Behad suhana.

 

jaise hi tera haanth mere haan tho main aata hai....
kuch suniiee nahi deta, ankoon ka contrast badal jata hai....

 

very goood....ek aur stanza likha karo ...4 is a balanced figure..

 

that font is difficult to read.... plz change.. btw nice poem..

 

All,

Thanks for the reply...Is it better viewed now??

 

Thanks..Madhuresh !! I generally write in even nos of stanzas......yeah but this time....only 3 were possible......aur waise bhi office ke kaam karte waqt yeh saari peoms lihi hain maine...

jald hi kuch aur post karungi...