Tanhayi hi apni mehfil...

Hasi ke peeche hazaaron aansoo chupa te chale
Dil mein ghum ka dariyan sambhaalte huey..
Na koi raasta...na koi manzil
Hogaya hai kitna paraya apna hi dil

Umeed ki thi maine khushiyan ki
Ab toh woh kashtiyaan bhi doob chuki hai
Har koi lagne laga hai paraya
Mujhse juda ho chuka hai mera hi saaya

Darte hai hum ab khwaabon se
kahi phirse umeedein na laga bhete apno se
Ab toh tanhayee hi apni mehfil hai
Ye soch ke hi har pal ko jiye jaa rahe hai...

Does that make any sense?lol

 

makes perfect sense to me....good job...looks to me you are truely a "Deewani" of someone

 

hey thnx...this is my 1st piece of writing...!Glad u liked it & yeah 4got 2 mention its 4 sum1 spcl...

 

Easy now gurl...u never told me u can write..Ah well u have said this is ya 1st piece!Good stuff i like it,but seems like you upset with life!

 

@broken_heart i havn't told u alot!..Thnx 4 da compliment though

 

hume bhi batoo razee dil aye pari
hansta huaa aur cheraaa ankee bhari bahri
jeene main kyaa, maza hai iss tarah se bhi
gaheri gahari saanse dhadkan dari dari......

hey will post it some where else also ..... tum accha likti hoo bas aisa mat likhoo ....

 

Kaafi acha likha hai aapne.. kip it up :beer:

 

Thanks @ babydoll!

 

kaun kambakht kahta hai ki sirf aankhe dil ka bayaan karti hai
aaj jeet gaye hai ye haath haal-e-dil batane mein

 

Buddy only give your hand to her not heart...She's got a big NO ENTRY board on 4 guys waiting to give their hearts..LOL!

 

welcome to the club Fatima :beer:.....of sad poets/poetess :

i liked it very much...it my track too...sadness.

 

and in case anyone doesn't know .. I make fun of Garima's "Track" :grin:

 

Thanks for making it public Mohsin....:annoyed:

 

Beautiful...
Keep it up!

REgards,
Zooom..!!

 

Thanks @ Garima & zoom...