ok yet i rite again...... lol..... but this time it was just thoughts moving around in my head.... some phrases and some words which meant a LOT! so just jotted them down...... wat do u guys say? do i succeed in calling this a POEM? seriously i just rote this like in 10 mins........ do comment! really looking forward to ur comments and AS I ALWAYS SAY... CRITISM is welcomed! do COMMENT! TALAASH Insaan nahi ablees hoon mein, Shetan hoon, Aik aisa jawab hoon, Jis ko sawal ki talaash hai, Is andheray mein, mein bhatakta hoon, Phir bhi teri talaash hai, Mujhey teri talaash hai, sirf teray saharay par mein chal raha hoon, kash kay keh mazil kareeb ho, meri mushkil ko asaan kar, meri madat kar, mujhey teri talaash hai, Kyounkay *TU HE MERA SAWAL HAI!* *(as in tu he meri mazil hai….. incase u don’t get it!)* tell me wat u think of it ppl!
*smirk* sorry man i spelled it wrong..... typing ERROR!!!!!! IS THAT A *~BIG~* DEAL?????? :shock: :shock: :shock:
hmmm nice one ... but from the poem it seems that u are a Male, however your profile depicts a female second: u seem to carry a fetish for CAPS? dont you? always using them ...
@Jekyll...i think shez just using caps to be more emphatic or expressive..not hollering..heehe @#ir@ ur poem just confused me so much..too many hidden Q. Marks in it..whoz the person in question i fail to give any proper feedback..m way too baffled wid dis :
ok thanks everyone for the reply..... mmmmmm........... now....... @ jekyll..... HI SSSLAYER! wassup man? just can't leave this site can u? lol...... well... yes i am a GIRL..... but it's like i have not considered my self as a GIRL but as a HUMAN! i am sure all the ppl who probably read urdu stuff know wat i mean.... thanks anyway! @ mukkaiss......... r u adding to it or wat? :think: @ garima..... THANKS A LOT...... u r always giving a nice response! @ vini....... lol..... no worries...... so was i wen i rote this... as i said just some phrases, thoughts and words in my mind that i rote..... i was confused too wen i rote it! @ hate.......... well........ man...... i rote this as a HUMAN>.... as a CREATURE...... of GOD! and this person(that is me) is seeking for the help of his LORD! hope u get it now....... and so does everyone else.......... : so do i call it a poem or not??????? :
nice work there.. was there some case of depression before u wrote this piece.. or should i say master piece.. or were u listening to a track of EP.. i would say nice work.. liked it.. keep up coming with stuff like this..
@ rizaaj........ yes i do agree that i was thinking of lyrics by EP wen i rote this....so it DOES have WORDS and thoughts about their lyrics! thanks MAN!!!!!!
