!-take a look around - limp bizkit - vocal suggestion-!

[MY BROWSER WAS NOT SHOWING THE PREVIOUS THREAD CREATED.. SO I CREATED THIS ONE! - BUT NOW ITS SHOWING ..OOPS!]

hi people,

I am a new member here.

Please guide me about the voacals as i got the time limit of just 30 days to improve it, as much as i could.

I had started with TAKE A LOOK AROUND - LIMP BIZKIT (MI2 TRACK) as i thought it would be easy.

So please give your feed back and guidance. no matter how ever harsh but speak truth. i wont even mind if someone ask me to leave VOCALS thing.. but speak truth because i want to improve my vocals.

abouth this file - the sound quality of this file got little weird as i tried adding some effects and i did not make any back up of the previous one.

Thank you,
people.. waiting for your comments!

here is link..

muziboo.com/fredy_limpy/music/take-a-look-around

 

come on people..

yet no replies.. suggestions.. tips.. bla..bla!

i need them. Feedback please!

 

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